Rain and Acid Rain [20~~Alternate Ending/20]

Oct 14, 2007 23:20

Title: Rain and Acid Rain [20~~Alternate Ending/20]
Author: chaosxcalamity
Rating: PG-13 or maybe PG
Pairing: Ryan/Brendon
POV: Ryan's
Summary: "Then don't leave me. Stay with me, here. Just, please, don't leave me alone."
Disclaimer: I don’t own anything, this is fiction. I got the idea from the movie Girl Interrupted. It really is nothing like the movie, not ( Read more... )

ryden, failing at life

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cass_a_daay October 15 2007, 05:03:27 UTC
*it no longer says it but LICKITY LICK LICK! FRANK!
ilyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy
*is going to read now*
lolz at me always doing other stuff EXCEPT writing my papers. (I'm reading slash instead of writing about gay rights hahahaha)

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cass_a_daay October 15 2007, 05:30:22 UTC
ok first *shanks anyone who comes near you with a machete or any other sharp objects*
lolz, you would prefer the other ending 'Mrs. I Really Should Write Something That Isn't Depressing But I Just Can't Help It' (but still, lmao at that mpreg standalone)
this ending was cuteeee but I must say, I must be morbid b/c I like the other a tonnnn too haha.
lolz at the kittens *PET'S DA KITTTAYYY*
(I still am hoping someone will "give me one for my bday")
and lastly swaying it from side to side. lmfaoooooo because that made me think of "Lean Like A Cholo" then of crackfics...then I couldn't stop laughing at you and our aim convo
hahaha
ilyyyyyyy x infinity + 2!

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chaosxcalamity October 15 2007, 16:03:18 UTC
bahahaha
lolz. that tis a long title (lmao. i want to write that same mpreg standalone again)
this one was lame with the kitties. this ending = failll / other ending = not fail, but passing with a D.
*PURRRSSS*..*cough*
(dude, if i do go to dallas i'll bring you one. that is, if my cat ever decides to have them lol)
bahahahaha
ilyyyy x life + oatmeal cookies

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cass_a_daay October 15 2007, 20:50:06 UTC
lmfao. the exact. same. one. b/c you could totally do that haha
lmfao pass with an A MOTHER NO-BLEEPS-FUCKING PLUS! I loved it. It twas saddddd
*nuzzles* I mean...er *coughfurballcough*
lmfao you would be my favorite person in the ENTIRE world. Not like you aren't already high up on the list (is that creepy, oh well haha)
ohhhh oatmeal cookies *drools*

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nejem October 15 2007, 10:08:34 UTC
lol, kitty birthday!!!!!!! :D

this was such a CUTE ending!!!!! the other one was really sad, but if I have to choose... I can't choose!!! xD because they were both awesome and I can read this one when I'm happy and stuff and I can read the other one when I'm in need for sad stories :)

you did an awesome job once again!!!!

I think I have a lot to catch up, I'll have to read a lot of your updates!!! :D I missed your work a lot, gosh!!!!! I hate being grounded and having my internet taken away >.

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chaosxcalamity October 15 2007, 16:05:55 UTC
lol I'm glad you liked it, deary <33

Awwwh, that sucks for being grounded.

I do miss talking to you btw!!
ily

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roadsidefury October 15 2007, 10:41:50 UTC
LOL FINALLY.

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chaosxcalamity October 15 2007, 15:56:11 UTC
LMAOO
lame = this ending w/ the cats
i wrote it and i was like wtf? but my brain totally sucks.
I didn't even want to write this hahaha
I hate this ending, I can't lie
lolz <333

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charliexo3 October 15 2007, 10:58:37 UTC
THIS ENDING IS SO MUCH BETTER AND HAD ME SMILING THE WHOLE TIME!
<33333333333333333333333

'Tis made of cotton candy, 70 degree Saturdays, puppies, daisies, and Love.

AMAZZZZINNNGGG!!!

Ok now that I'm done freaking out about this finally being up I have to get ready for school.

:DDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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chaosxcalamity October 15 2007, 16:11:31 UTC
lol i'm glad you enjoyed it <3333

and i love all of those things =D

<33

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mikikoshikawa October 15 2007, 12:47:26 UTC
hm in a totally constructive critism way...
i liked the other ending better.

like.. yeah it was sad and all...
but this one seemed to jump around way too much. *shrugs* but its good i wont lie.

but the first ending was definitly the better one.

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chaosxcalamity October 15 2007, 15:58:22 UTC
yeah. this one sucked hard. i hate this one and i didn't want to write it, let alone post it. i always wanted him to die in the end so i felt like i was forcing myself to write this stupid thing.

and the whole kitty thing..ya I got a kitten so..there's my excuse for that lolol

but yes, i really really dislike this one =D

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mikikoshikawa October 15 2007, 19:33:21 UTC
ahah

kitties are fine.. got one for mine xD

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