5 emails Ryo sends Ueda and the only letter he gets in return...

[chaoticempath]

Comments

[quinnsan]

I came pretty close to crying at the end, thats how amazing that was. ^^ I loved it, and I didn't fully register it from the start, but in the back of my mind I knew there was a reason for Ueda not replying to Ryo's messages, and I know what that reason is now.

[chaoticempath]

*nods* Yeah, I tried to make it so ppl wouldn't guess until you come to it, ne. To keep the suspense... :) *ish ebil*

[resha_ueda]

I knew somethng one wrong when Jin handed that letter~~
Oh hime~
and Ryo-chan -tries to comfort him-

*walks to a corner then cries*

[chaoticempath]

Awwwww *patpat* I'm glad you liked it? (I hope you did anyway...)

[dark_flare54]

This was definitely worth the wait! I almost started crying when I reached the end. The thing that I love most is how you describe Ryo's emotions, how he goes from being angry to being devastated and how the others react to that.

[chaoticempath]

*smiles* Thanks, I'm glad you feel it was worth the wait. I was worried everyone would think it was rubbish or something. *sheepish smile*

I tried to picture things how I would react in the same situation, and I think he's not really that much different, ne. Just about anyone would do the same, I feel...and that's how I tried to portray him.

[hanny2luv]

That was beautiful and sad. I kinda hope that it was Ueda who was at the door instead of Jin and Yamapi.And it almost made me cry when Ryo was so heartbroken.

Nice work.

[chaoticempath]

Thanks *smiles*

[twentysvn]

OK...this is great. i mean GREAT, really.
can't see what's coming.
i'm kind of expecting it to be a fun story since your writing style is fun..
but when i reach through the end...T__T
the saddest thing is, the happening is came at the most unexpected time.

[chaoticempath]

Fun? *chuckles* I dunno, I thought I had it set up to be angsty but that's ok. Thanks for the compliment. And I'm glad you liked the story. =)