This is your first fanfic? It's simply the most amazing fic I have ever read. No seriously. You are amazing. I love how it's in this point of view, not very writers use the 'I' form and ones who do don't use it well, but you took it and omg stunning. I am waiting now for more work by you!
OMFG. *EMBARRASSED* It's technically the first I've finished, yes, though the one I was afraid to post was another JaeMin I'm doing. :) Thank you so much! That was part of the assignment, using the first-person narrative pov. It's hard! asdfkmkasfmasdfmladsmf <3333333333
So I'm waiting for your crack!fic and see this.... Why aren't you in a constant state of writing? This was so lovely to read. I really really really like the last paragraph. I wanted to quote some part of the story, but I really can't seem to make up my mind. The whole story is rather satisfying and it feels really complete, in a way very few one-shots do.
This is great! I agree with the others, more stories please!
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It's technically the first I've finished, yes, though the one I was afraid to post was another JaeMin I'm doing. :)
Thank you so much! That was part of the assignment, using the first-person narrative pov. It's hard!
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Why aren't you in a constant state of writing? This was so lovely to read. I really really really like the last paragraph. I wanted to quote some part of the story, but I really can't seem to make up my mind. The whole story is rather satisfying and it feels really complete, in a way very few one-shots do.
This is great! I agree with the others, more stories please!
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Thank you so much! <3
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the first person is really tricky, I agree. I wish people used it more!
thank you! <333
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