{fic} White Lies - Chapter 4

[charcoaldonkey]

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey  
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: PG-13 (for now.. hehe)
Summary: "The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

Comments

[anesato]

That was so cute ,Ochan miss his Nino and Nino too, Oh they must be together;DD They hurting each other, it sad;/ Ok I waitinig for next chaps ;D

[charcoaldonkey]

Thank you~!
I really enjoyed writing this chapter, especially the last part >.<
Sad Ohno just breaks my heart! I wanna cuddle him up and comfort him, ne?
Thanks for commenting~ ^.^

[yumi_usagi]

Ano, new reader here *shy*
Thanks for writing. This is so sad. They love each other but can't be together. Hope there will be a happy ending. Can't wait for next chap.

[charcoaldonkey]

Yay~~ *huggles*
LOVE new readers~! ^_^
And yes, i'm a fan of happy endings myself, although in real life things are always a bit more complicated ne?
We will seeee~ *strokes mustache*
Thanks for commenting~ ^.^

[soraohno]

This chapter...is kinda heart-breaking.. T.T

But it's Beautiful!

[charcoaldonkey]

Uwaah thank you~!
I'm glad you decided to keep reading! ^.^
Next chappie should be up soon~
Thanks for commenting! <3

[crystallino358]

m heart cries for you nino.... be strong.... and oh-chan... please don't make it harder.... huhuhu....
i hope they find a way to be together again...

Q(^^)m

[charcoaldonkey]

I'm sure they will~ Ohmiya sk is forever~~ ^.^
The next chapter is a short one so it'll be posted soon~
Thanks for commenting~ ^_^

[arashistyle]

Owwwwwwn...
Poor Nino...
Poor Riida...
I kinda wish I could comfort them...
I hate Kitagawa-san! Grrrrrrrrrrrrrr...
Don't he dare spliting up my baby boys!
Please, make them smile again!

[charcoaldonkey]

Hahahaha I hate him too, but he just makes Such a great bad guy >.<
Thank you for commenting~~