{fic} White Lies - Chapter 6

[charcoaldonkey]

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey 
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: R
Summary: "The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

Comments

[spangleayee]

Dammit! I couldn't even enjoy the smutno fully at least for my teary eyes T.T

I can't decide whether to be thinking "Poor Nino!" or "Poor Ohno!" >.<

[charcoaldonkey]

hahahaha Me too!! >.< Nino is such a Baka but at the same time he doesn't mean to be,
I feel so bad for both of them T.T
Thanks for the comment~~

[risuw_chan]

aaaaaaahhh, thanks for the breakfast *yumm*

[charcoaldonkey]

Muhahaha you're Very welcome ^.^
Next update will be soon (it's another short chap) >.<
Thanks for commenting~

[arashistyle]

Poor sad Riida...
poor little Nino...
They want each other so much!
How can Kitagawa-san be such a mean person?
I bet he couldn't recognize love even if it slapped his face, that blind fool man!
Waiting for next chap!

[charcoaldonkey]

Hai! I definitely agree with you,
Stupid Johnny. >.>
By the way i absolutely ADORE your picture. Muhahaha lots of dirty thoughts there ^.^
Thanks for commenting~~

[rio_sora]

ah! so sad! yes nino, you had done a big mistake, but how can they be together again when the whole world is against it, but i hope at least ohno knew that nino love him too...can't wait for next~thanks a lot! <3

[charcoaldonkey]

Hmm yes i was thinking about that too, ne?
It must be hard for people who's love isn't accepted by society, at least it isn't as bad for Homosexual people now-a-days but it still isn't perfect, Or anywhere's near where it should be...
It makes me so angry to think about >.<
Anyway next update should be in a day or two, because the chap is very short ^.^
Thanks for commenting~~

[soraohno]

At the end of this fic you HAVE to write a second smex scene you just HAVE TO! With Ohno on top xD

And I really didn't expect Aiba to be with Matsujun... @@

[charcoaldonkey]

Ehhh~~? ANOTHER?
Hahahaha Well, I'll let you in on a little secret, ne?
I've started writing another Ohmiya fic, in which Nino is a Total bitch for different reasons, and Ohno is... well, Ohno, Muhaha and you inspired me to write Ohno!seme >.<
And really? I thought i'd been hinting at Junba for awhile now ^.^
I think they'd be sooo kawaii!
Thanks for commenting~~

[soraohno]

Wahha!! waha!! *gasps*!! HAHAHA <333 Nino = bitch? Ohno= seme?!

Are you planning on blowing my mind AWAY?!!! Are you serious?!!! xD xD
I wanna read that one!!!! *excited!!!*

Well, I'm also a Sakuraiba fan so to me it's always...Aiba + Sho!