{fic} White Lies - Chapter 7

Oct 16, 2010 10:59

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey 
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: Pg-13
Summary: "The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

White Lies - Chapter 7 )

l: chaptered, p: junxaiba, b: arashi, g: angst, r: pg-13, p: ohnoxnino

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itsumo_niji October 16 2010, 18:30:25 UTC
awwww...that was too sad T^T why ohno cant see that nino is hurting too?T^T
please update soon
thank YOU <3
p.s:honestly i was alittle down since nino was topping still its was great ^^

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charcoaldonkey October 16 2010, 18:47:21 UTC
Eh~~ another Ohno!seme lover?! XD
Well my next fic (still in it's first planning stages) will be Ohno-Seme! ^_^
And the next update will be in a few days!!!
Thank you for commenting~!

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yumi_usagi October 16 2010, 21:55:20 UTC
Poor Nino :____; Why Ohno doesn't understand that Nino wants to protect him and Nino is the one feels hurt the most.
Thanks for writing. Next chap will be the last one. Aw, I'm gonna miss this fic.
I'm so excited when I read that you will write a fic that make Ohno top because I was a little bit dissappoited when you let Nino top last time. Well, Ohno is always the seme in my eyes, hehe.

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charcoaldonkey October 17 2010, 15:00:03 UTC
Hai, it must have been so shocking for Riida though ne? He probably wasn't thinking straight >.<
And yes! I'm trying to plan out the details for my next Ohmiya fic, Demo i promised my sister i'd write her prompt for Sakuraiba, so i think that one will be next ^.^
But the next Ohmiya one will Definitely have Ohno being Seme ^_^
Thanks for commenting~~

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anesato October 16 2010, 22:48:49 UTC
Ok I must say poor Nino but poor Ohno too, Nino from the begining should tell him true, always happend bad things when people didn't tell true becouse it's better tell lies ;/ for them,
I love that strory and I totally waiting how you will end that strory ;DD
thanks

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charcoaldonkey October 17 2010, 15:03:01 UTC
Indeed, it is Much easier sometimes to just lie, and that's what Nino thought in the beginning, ne?
Demo i think he realized lying was much, Much harder ^.^
Thank you for commenting~

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featherohno October 17 2010, 01:59:26 UTC
nani??? eh riida,nino doesnt mean to hurt you..please understand...
nino...run to him!!! get riida back!
i hate johnny san...
next chapter,onegai..

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charcoaldonkey October 17 2010, 15:05:35 UTC
I agree!! Even as i was writing it i felt like screaming "Nino you twat! Run after him!!!"
Although somehow I didn't write that happening?
Hahahaha the next update will be in a few days ^.^
Thanks for commenting~~

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ady_arashi October 17 2010, 04:26:44 UTC
kyaaaaaa T_T
toshiii please hear him kyaaa T_T, why you? waaa Y_Y
tahnks for sharing *i'm crying right now* waaa toshi nino loves youuu T_T waaaa ninoooo bakaaa Y_Y
thanks and gambatte with the next please Y_Y

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charcoaldonkey October 17 2010, 15:07:06 UTC
Oh nooo *Wipes tears*
I agree, Nino IS a baka, ne?
Next update will be in a day or so,
Thank you for commenting~ ^.^

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