{fic} White Lies - Chapter 8 (Final)

[charcoaldonkey]

Title: White Lies
Author: charcoaldonkey  
Pairing: OhnoxNino (with a little JunxAiba)
Genre: Angst
Rating: Pg-13
Summary: "The rain beat down harder and Ohno looked like he’d been shot. He fell to his knees and ran his hands through his hair as tears spilled down his cheeks. “Nino…” He whispered, “Please… don’t do this.”

Comments

[momo_love96]

that was an interesting final.to be honest I thought that it's gonna be a little smex part at the end but this was quite surprising XD anyway I reaaally liked this fic and I can't wait for your next.it's gonna be Ohmiya too right? XD

[charcoaldonkey]

Uwaah thank you Very much!
And yes, i debated on another smex scene, demo i decided i liked it better to leave it as it was ^.^
And Hai! Most likely, it depends on a few things, if not then Ohmiya will Definitely be the one after that ^_^
Thank you for reading~~<3

[anesato]

Really sweet ending, and thay finally are together;DDDD but that stroy need sequel ;D ok really great story , I love it and waiting for next Ohmiya stories from you ;DDD

[charcoaldonkey]

Oh my gosh!
I just happened to accidentally click on this, and i realized there were comments i hadn't replied to!!!
Gomen! >.<
Thank you though, I really loved writing and posting it ^.^
And I'm actually almost done a short Ohmiya story that Halloween inspired me to write! xD
That should be out within a week or so! ^_^
Thank you for the comment~~

[itsumo_niji]

awww finally the ending XD
so sweet,ohno ran back to him kyyyaaaa XD
thank you for this great series and will definitely wait for your next fic ^__^ thank you SO much <3

[charcoaldonkey]

Thank you for reading~~
SO sorry this reply came so late DX
I didn't even realize I had three more comments on this chap!
Thanks for sticking with it the whole way through though, ne? I really appreciate it xD
And the next Ohmiya fic will be out in a week or so! Demo its very R rated, for frightening situations and sexual content, so be warned ^.^
Thanks for the comment~

[rio_sora]

yay! back together~hope they'll be happy^^
thanks a lot!

[charcoaldonkey]

Thanks for commenting~
And Gomen for not replying until now!! I don't know What happened but i didn't realize i had more comments on this chap >.<
Thank you for reading though~~!

[kiriezero]

aww ♥
it was so good that Ohno forgave him ^^ but it wasn't Nino's fault anyway :P they both should be angry at the boss| >.<
thanks for shring your fic! :D

[charcoaldonkey]

Thanks for reading it!! (:
Hahaha yeah i wanted somebody to just smack some sense into the old man, ne? xD
Oh well, thank you for commenting!! <3