Comments | charitypomaybo: Busted Wonder page 41

charitypomaybo

Mar 29, 2007 14:34

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For he on honey-dew hath fed, And drunk the milk of Paradise. iamcoldde March 29 2007, 18:42:49 UTC

very solid & lyrical treatment for a low-key page~

NB. That should be "In Xanadu did Kubla Khan ..."

SO
HOW ABOUT THOSE
EMALES!?

From her kennel beneath the rock charitypomaybo March 29 2007, 18:54:58 UTC

bless yeh, fixed. i'm a dumb butt. albeit a solid and lyrical one.

man_size March 29 2007, 18:44:17 UTC

Lovely.

charitypomaybo March 29 2007, 18:55:22 UTC

thank you kindly sir

merovingian March 29 2007, 20:36:11 UTC

Oh, so beautiful! I love how the affection and nervousness are so tightly wound together.

charitypomaybo March 29 2007, 20:46:21 UTC

this scene is def fun that way. thanks for yr nice comment :)

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charitypomaybo March 29 2007, 20:47:32 UTC

_stranger_here March 29 2007, 21:53:19 UTC

Ooh, how does it end? HOW DOES IT END?

charitypomaybo March 29 2007, 21:57:07 UTC

tune in next week!

billiambabble April 1 2007, 15:03:52 UTC

But, but ... isn't that poem in it's entirety officially unfinished!? :o

I dont trust this one ... it'll all end in claws and mandibles!! :o