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[charla_ann]

I've written another song....and can't decide if the ending is quite right....actually I'm thinking it's not....so I need some CONSTRUCTIVE criticism people....don't be mean....I don't take kindly to meanness....

"Fuck You" Fights

Verse 1:
Strummin' on my guitar
Wonderin' how lonely you are
Cause all I'm thinkin' about is you
And I know you said you

Comments

[revolutionary37]

Re: Nice

[charla_ann]

Thank you so much! Having read almost every post that you've put in the poetry community....this is a huge compliment to me....
And I like your alternate bridge/ending....I'm still not sure whether or not I want to keep the one I have....but the more comments on it, people really seem to like it....and then I find myself reading over it again, and I even kinda start to like it myself....I dunno =)
But seriously....thank you!

[revolutionary37]

[revolutionary37]

[revolutionary37]

[charla_ann]

Of course my dear! =)
I'll add you on my messenger here in a sec....I should be on tommorrow afternoon sometime....
=)

[mistyautum]

I love it!

[charla_ann]

Thank you dear =-)