Comments | charliechaplin2: Not quite new Hooligans.

charliechaplin2

Not quite new Hooligans.

Oct 17, 2011 21:41

Ok, so it's technically nothing new (as in I haven't added any chapters) but I have COMPLETELY revised the Prologue and the two chapters I've already written. Feedback on what people think would be dandy if you guys have the time/inclination ^_^

Also, I intend to post it up on LJ at some point in the near future, but for now it's on ff.net ^___^

fic: hooligans

Comments 3

satine86 October 17 2011, 20:50:03 UTC

!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANYTHING RELATING TO HOOLIGANS IS GOOD!!!!!! REVISIONS ARE GOOD!!!

AND HALF NAKED CEITHIN FOR THE WIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (wut?)

*toddles off to read*

ellorgast October 17 2011, 23:22:22 UTC

I WILL TAKE ANY EXCUSE TO READ OR REREAD HOOLIGANS

THOUGH WHY THE REVISION?

IT WAS ALREADY EPIC.

minako_chan4 October 24 2011, 14:44:28 UTC

Well I think it'd be nice if the guys nagged Kunzite about the "I'm hot for you thing" XD lol well it's just a small thing, I know.

But on the larger scale, I don't know like I'd like it if they had a calmn and fun period before anything bad happened, or even before the Shitennou realized who they were.

I'd like it if they fell in love before that, and then *bam!* OMG we had past lives with you!
I'm not sure if you've considered putting in some new bad guys but it'd be fun if it were just real life criminals for a change, at least for some time also.

Hmmm... I'm really wondering what kind of reaction Kunzite will have to Minako after the Rugby incident ^^ lol that's something I can't wait to see. I remember peeing in my pants after I read the end of that last chapter.