Advent Drabblender: Door 1

Dec 01, 2011 22:07

Here's my little ficlet for the first day of lovelylytton's fantastic Christmas Drabblender!!

JOIN IN GUYS!!!!!

Prompt: Dear Santa, all I want for Christmas is...
Characters: Makoto/Nephrite (Lita/Leo)
Rating: PG
AN: Hmm, I decided to use Americanised names, I thought it suited them better. Also, 'Danny' is Zoisite, I do not own Cafe Nero (but they make a ( Read more... )

character: nephrite, prompts: christmas, fandom: sailor moon, character: makoto/jupiter

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satine86 December 1 2011, 22:30:48 UTC
I haven't read the fic yet, but I have to tell you: saying that Joe is Hiro does so many things to me I can't even think straight.

zOMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG *passes out*

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satine86 December 1 2011, 22:56:07 UTC
AWWW THIS WAS SO ADORABLE!!!!! OH LITA JUST KISS HIM NOW!!!!!!! FOR HEAVENS SAKE!!!!!

sharp bi-coloured gaze

It was most likely because he hadn’t shaved in over a week and now sported a light beard which framed his jawline, lower cheeks and upper lip, matching the wavy dark coffee coloured hair which reached his nape.


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charliechaplin2 December 1 2011, 23:34:48 UTC
Hehehehe.

Oh dear! Satine you have to do something quick! Rei and Jade must stay on top!!!! (Write for the drabblender!)

Glad you liked it!!!!

Also! The ovaries explosion gif is HILARIOUS! HA!

And I know, right? Joe IS Hiromasa, no doubt. ^_^

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rainbabie1 January 5 2012, 18:22:12 UTC
This ovaries explosion freaking rocks.

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warriorofice December 2 2011, 01:12:47 UTC
Yay for fic!!

1) SO CUTE!!!! From the opening through the end, but I especially like the opening.
2) I LOVE that Darien has trouble with boundaries. Your explanation made so much sense. Now we only have to bet on how long he lets himself be taken advantage of by the shitennou as they fish for information about the senshi ;)
3) His eyes!! Love the bicolored eyes! "He rolled his eyes, the blue one catching the light more than his brown one and giving the brief illusion that it sparkled."
4) You put brownies in the same sentence as cigarette butts dipped in street water! I may cry, but I'm totally on board with how effectively that comparison works :)
5) Wonderful cold weather descriptions. And how hard it is to nudge someone when both are wearing puffy winter jackets, definitely know how that feels.
6) WE MUST HAVE THE KISS. Yes??

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jenbunny December 2 2011, 04:34:56 UTC
oh my goodness, so cute Charlie ^^ ... I loved it!!

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mrcrybrilliance December 2 2011, 05:51:50 UTC
I don't know actors, so even having read the other two verses, I still don't know who the pbs are. ;-)

Hehehe.

Anyway, this cute and sweet and I like her determination and then her not just immediately melting at seeing she's closer than she thinks. Very cute and well done!

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