Comments | charliegir1: Not of My Choice (Pt 1)

charliegir1

Not of My Choice (Pt 1)

Jul 18, 2010 22:37

She felt it in her gut first, just a slight burn at the beginning of the Sanctified meeting. She hadnt been this warm since she got that fever as a child and defied the doctors prognosis that she would not only not be able to walk but she would be struck deaf and dumb... defiance, yes it is what she does again.

Unconsciously she fans herself as she ( Read more... )

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doubting_tom July 19 2010, 13:25:52 UTC

I heard the scene went really well and people were surprised as shit

How do you feel about it?

charliegir1 July 19 2010, 15:59:39 UTC

it was far more amazing then I expected. The Reactions, the ripples... I just hope that everyone else enjoyed the scene too.

doubting_tom July 19 2010, 21:05:18 UTC

Cool.

You know, I just realized that Simon will be at GotM this weekend. Should make for an interesting event...

charliegir1 July 19 2010, 21:09:24 UTC

oh that should be fun..

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charliegir1 July 19 2010, 19:13:06 UTC

the LS need Mags more then ever now. <3

cruxoffaith July 20 2010, 17:17:49 UTC

It's true.

"Hold on to your lugnuts boys, it's.. time for an overhaul!"

doubting_tom July 19 2010, 21:05:35 UTC

Mags can come be a dirty crone!!!

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angelsamael July 19 2010, 21:23:44 UTC

*blink blink*
The irony of this is a bitter bitter irony.
And makes the email in my inbox on the delivery waaaaaaaaaay more amusing/bitter.

charliegir1 July 19 2010, 21:30:09 UTC

yeah... now you understand what I meant in my email?

angelsamael July 19 2010, 23:50:41 UTC

Oh yeah. And it is awesome.
I forsee a really awkward scene between Kincaid and at least one other person.

charliegir1 July 19 2010, 23:52:37 UTC

Poor Simon....

en_sof July 20 2010, 00:03:16 UTC

Thank you for including us darlin. As for Magdalena...she is indeed needed now more than ever.

It was a great story and I'm glad to have seen it front to back. :)

beautifultyrant July 25 2012, 00:38:48 UTC

Wow. I am very glad I got to read this. As I said the other night, this filled in some vital holes to the story. And poor, strong Charli. What a lovely and painful end. The last line is, by far, the perfection of the story. The read was good, but it didn't hit home until "I no longer drink of your children... I only drink of your son Jesus Christ." I don't think there could have been a better ending.

Always good to look back on old war stories and old characters. Though it's usually in bitter sweet longing. The chronicle was lucky to have known her, I'm sad I never quite got the chance!

But new stories to tell.

charliegir1 July 25 2012, 00:49:43 UTC

:) thank you! I added you and now you can read the locked stuff too

beautifultyrant July 25 2012, 00:51:31 UTC

Woohoo!