The Legacy (a different version :D)

[charmedothfan]

Newly improved and cut down to only 299 words! Wow! That's less than the 300-word limit! :))

The Legacy

When you were younger, did you ever have anything so important to you - perhaps a stuffed toy or a gadget - that you thought you’d never live without? Twenty-thirty years from now, will that thing still be important to you? Will

Comments

[hyperwriter2794]

You guys are lucky. 300 words. :o Ours was only 250. D: (And mine was exactly 250. BWAHAHA)

Anyhow, awesome job! :) I like how you threw questions to the reader in the beginning. It makes it more intriguing as well as it makes one think (and that`s a good thing :D). Keep up the good work!

[teenynini]

aaaw how shweet. :D also, that mendoza guy = awesome. great read, man. great read. :B

[charmedothfan]

the mendoza guy knows your mom. :))

[ladeefrikkinda]

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.

Nice work dude!