Of Pirate's And Naval Commanders-- Five Months Later

Jan 25, 2008 01:27


*~Five Months Later~*

A sailor all his life, Samuel Flint had witnessed a great number of marvelous sights. He'd seen gold and jewels in quantities that were beyond the wildest dreams of most men; he'd experiences the wonder of seeing nothing but deep blue water stretching for miles, and he'd seen a heavenly artist's spilled paint splattered across ( Read more... )

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spamala97 January 24 2008, 22:23:03 UTC
OMFG SO MUCH LOVE

*TACKLE*

THANK YOU DARLING

YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY WEEK MONTH WITH THIS

AND ALSO ROBBED ME OF MY ABILITY TO PUNCTUATE

EEEEEEE

:D

*calms*

A'ight, sorry.

First off, Samuel/Adah is the cutest thing EVER. I loved his thoughts about her... *lovesick sigh* Adorable, just adorable.

Bonny's totally my fave. So much like Erin. [I wonder how many countries SHE could name in five minutes, eh?]

And Creda's sooo kickass. I love the way she snarks at Davy.
[They're in looooooove.]

Lastly, ADAH IS SO TOTALLY WITH CHILD[REN]. LIL' HEBREW BABIES TO BE BORN ONBOARD, I HOPE?

*squees with the happy*

ily ily ily ily ily more than toast.

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spamala97 January 25 2008, 01:22:58 UTC
ily ily ily ily ily ily ily more that toast WITH BUTTER!

How do you say "HOLY FUCK, I'M KNOCKED UP BY AN EX-PIRATE!" in Hebrew? =)

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spamala97 January 25 2008, 03:42:38 UTC
Uhmm... errrr... *struggles*

I'll, ah, have to get back to you on that one.
;D

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drama_queen1786 January 24 2008, 22:51:47 UTC
Cedar...I LURVE YOU!!! You are utterly fantastic and I bow down to your fabulousness!! Not to completely rip off Sam's sentiments, but this made my day, week, month, etc.!

*glomps*

I don't know which part I loved best...I adore the clandestine relationships of Creda and Davy, and Samuel and Adah, and I LOVE LOVE LOVE all the proper grammar! It makes me so happy!

You are the best. Ever.

And while I'd much rather sit here and continue to tell you how wonderful you are and how much I loved this chapter, I fear I must be off to class.

Bravo!

*presents Cedar with giant scrumptious chocolate cake, cupcakes, and a charming desk lamp*

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drama_queen1786 January 25 2008, 01:23:59 UTC
Thank you! I'm sorry it took me so long... Yay for proper grammar!

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wtf? anonymous October 23 2010, 18:37:38 UTC
I'm sorry sweetheart, but this is appalling. You really don't have any real writing talent and you seriously need to readjust your ambitions and outlook for life, focus on gaining some proper qualifications and put all thoughts of being a writer, out of your head. Please don't waste any more time on this meandering, laboured drivel.

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