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Nobody's Fault

Mar 05, 2012 22:29

Title: Nobody's Fault
Author: jerom2003
Editor: lit_luminary
Rating: PG-13
Characters: Foreman, Cameron
Summary: Missing scene from ep. "Nobody's Fault"

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Comments 6

pinkuro March 5 2012, 19:01:09 UTC

Perfect missing scene, I love it!

jerom2003 March 6 2012, 08:04:33 UTC

Thank you very much for commenting!
I actually wrote it not after "Nobody's Fault", but after I re-watched "The Lockdown". I got so angry with Cameron.
Though I did really miss a scene between Chase and Foreman, I don't think they would talk much, they didn't even need to say anything, I think they would understand each other perfectly.

fluttershy March 5 2012, 19:02:47 UTC

Oh, wow.

I loved this in every way possible. It is very in character and very pictureable. Thank-you so much for writing it.

jerom2003 March 6 2012, 08:11:47 UTC

Thank you very much for the feedback!
I'm really glad you liked it.
lit_luminary edited this story perfectly. I haven't wrote anything in English for a while, so she helped me a lot.
I missed Chase and Foreman interaction in that episode. I don't think they would say anything to each other, just the eye contact would have been enough.
And Cameron appeared here because I recently re-watched "The Lockdown" and then this idea came into my mind.

freddie_mac March 5 2012, 22:43:05 UTC

*shivers* ouchie, ouchie, ouchie. Yes, perfect missing scene. The only alternative would have been for Cam to come rushing back and smother him 'cause now that he's broken he's safe to love.

jerom2003 March 6 2012, 08:14:50 UTC

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

I don't think just being broken is enough for her to come back, maybe if he was dying that would have been even more safe for her.