OC Fic: The Hart Break

[chaseii]

Title:  The Hart Break

Chapter  3  Part 3  (*glares at lj*)

Author:  ChaseII

Story Rating: PG-13(?) (minor language)

Disclaimer: The OC Universe, with all its assorted characters, belongs to Josh Schwartz, et. al. No copyright or trademark infringement is intended, nor is any money being made.

A/N:  Many thanks to Beachtree for reviewing this chapter

Comments

[finlee]

Awwww! Really wonderful. I was afraid Ryan wasn't going to make an appearance in chapter 3 but there he is! Seth can be such an idiot but I know that's just the way he is. But at least it put some important stuff out in the open and could be dealt with honestly.

I really, really hope chapter 4 pops up as quickly as chapter 3 did. I really love the Harts - Seventeen was such a wonderful fic. I can't tell you how happy I was you did a sequel (or if I may be so bold as to say story two of an epic).

[zbyszko]

Chapter 3 - all 3 parts- was just wonderful. I would quote favorite bits but that would mean quoting the whole thing. : )

[indigorayne]

I'm really enjoying this series and can't wait to read more.

[anne35]

I only have a second, but I wanted to let you know how wonderful this chapter was. Each characterization was spot on. I particularly enjoyed seeing how Megan views Kirsten and the questions she has about their relationship.

[helen_c]

Perfect!

I have the feeling one or more persons are going to be hurt before this is over, though--they all made mistakes, some by leaving Ryan, some by not accepting him immediately, and yes, they hurt, but nothing can change them, and there were good reasons in both cases... The way Megan and Kirsten gauge each other... Well, Ryan is sure to pick up on that early on.

And aw for the hug! Just what the woobie needed. :)