OC Fic: The Hart Break

[chaseii]

Title:  The Hart Break

Chapter  5  (Part 3 of 3)

Author:  ChaseII

Story Rating: PG-13(?) (minor language)

Disclaimer: The OC Universe, with all its assorted characters, belongs to Josh Schwartz, et. al. No copyright or trademark infringement is intended, nor is any money being made.

A/N:  Mostly Unbeta'd -- all mistakes are mine, mine, mine...

Comments

[brandywine421]

God, dude, way to make me cry.

I love this. I really like the way Kirsten's finally trying to reach out to Ryan, and the underlying jealousy causing it as she realizes that she missed out on the chance to be a 'real mother' to Ryan.

♥

This is such a great exploration of Ryan/Kirsten. And I've always ♥'d the Harts.

[chaseii]

I so wanted Canon Kirsten to be a 'real mother' to Ryan. I wish she'd had a fraction of the warmth she so often has in our flisters' hands... (including yours and mine!)

[a_dawn]

This fic is sooooo painful. Wonderful, but painful.

[chaseii]

It is painful. It has to be... (And thanks!)

[slinn01]

wow, great chapter. it's really, really good. i'm happy for ryan, but i'm really feeling bad for kirsten too! you can't blame ryan for being all excited about the harts, but you just can't help but feel bad for kirsten!

[chaseii]

Canon Kirsten always makes me very, very sad.

[zbyszko]

All 3 parts of chapter 5 were a lovely treat after a day of babysitting a 4 year old. : )

[chaseii]

Your 4 year old sounds perfectly delightful. I've got a paid of 2 year-olds I seldom get to see (daughters of my nephews) -- wish they were closer so I could babysit, too.

Thanks!

WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[thekiller00]

I really liked how you brought Ryan and Kirsten closer as a mother and son relationship when they talked !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! The box that Megan kept with stuff about Ryan shows how much she cares for him and wants whats best !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I can't wait to see what happens when Ryan goes to Berkley with Megan and Sam !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Re: WOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

[chaseii]

I always wanted Canon Kisten to talk to Ryan about real issues. Her alcoholism. His past. His place in her life. Never happened on the show. :(