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OC Fic: Consequences

Oct 11, 2007 19:16

Title: Consequences

"AU-ish" missing scene from Season One's The Outsider (AU-ish because these Cohens try to parent)

Part 1A (Because LJ has a fetish for short chapters and I have a thing for length)

Characters: Cohens+1

Author: ChaseII

Story Rating: PG-13 (language)

Disclaimer: The OC Universe, with all its assorted characters, belongs to Josh ( Read more... )

consequences

Comments 10

slinn01 October 12 2007, 01:53:37 UTC

so glad to see a post from you! i've been looking for great fics and nothing has caught my eye. everything you write is amazing! i can't wait to read more, i'm only through 1-a. it's great so far and i can't wait to see why sandy is so upset.

chaseii October 20 2007, 06:33:15 UTC

Thank you so much for your kind words. Hope you enjoyed the rest of the Chapter.

teachertam October 12 2007, 14:33:14 UTC

Hee! Beachtree just told me that you had posted a story I had to read.

I'm loving it!

I have *so* wanted a story that filled in these blanks. There was *such* potential, at the end of this ep, and I've yet to read anything that gave me what I wanted.

This story is doing just that.

Thank you.

:)

chaseii October 20 2007, 06:35:28 UTC

Thank you for reading and commenting. It means a lot to get feedback.

There are so many blanks TPTB never filled in -- so many organic stories they never told that I wanted to see. Sigh. Such untapped potential, sitting there right in front of them!

fredsmith518 October 13 2007, 21:21:18 UTC

“You called me - of course I came.” love that
also like the early Ryan response, so unceratin, with very little to go on.

chaseii October 20 2007, 06:36:54 UTC

I always wanted to see what happened, after Ryan being convinced he was 'so out of here'. Thank you for reading & commenting!

katwoman76 October 21 2007, 13:56:42 UTC

Perfect description of both boys and their different reaction to the situation.
Poor Ryan. Conditioned through his past it's no wonder he thinks the worst and doesn't know what to make out of Sandy's reactions.
And hearing only parts of he phone call, of course I would think the worst.
After everything he has been through, it makes sense that he would believe it's all over.
TBC in the next part.

chaseii October 21 2007, 19:00:27 UTC

So glad you're reading!

katwoman76 October 21 2007, 19:26:13 UTC

I'm always reading - you can be sure of that.
It was just the stress at work that kept me from commenting.
My brain was simply empty when I finally got home every night afer a long long day.

oc_gambit2 October 26 2007, 04:04:10 UTC

Oh, this is marvelous- an involved Sandy who's not assuming the situation will take care of itself. And there had to be some police/caseworker involvement in anything involving a kid on probation and 'gunshot residue ( ... )