Procession

[chasing8]

Yellow paper lanterns guide our way

Comments

[anonymous]

you have such crafted lyricism that i admire. have u considered the poems you'd like to worshop? I think, the ones you choose should be the one's you consider for publication or submiting to journals.

[chasing8]

Thank you, though I feel I don't harness that lyricism as I'd like quite yet. Always working to make the lines tidier, to keep the flow going. It feels good to work on, though.

There are a few I have in mind for our blog, though perhaps it'd be best to get your opinion, as well as Peter's, as to which ones seem the closest to being ready.

[brittlogsdon]

wonderful poem. I could see the whole scene unfolding before me.