I want to be your secret (13-15/26)

[chasing_spring]

Title: I want to be your secret
Pairing: Ryopi
Genre: AU / Drama / Friendship / Romance
Rating: PG-13 (swearing)
Summary: Pi is a Johnny's idol and Ryo is a salaryman living in the same apartment building. Despite coming from different worlds, they form a friendship that ends up being a pillar of support through the various trials they encounter,

Comments

[tatoeba]

;lkansd;lgkasd;fa Seeing these three chapters just made my day. But omg a;lskdng;a Yamapi. ;_____________; I just want to give him a big hug. Poor guy. I really like how you show the kind of emotional rollercoaster he has to go through; the side of an idol most people don't think about or really get to see. Like this line:

Pi allows himself one single terrified and gasped sob before drawing everything inside and composing himself once more.

I loved that. It was heartbreaking but I just loved this moment. That he can't waste time letting it all get to him but instead he goes to fix things and ;alskdng;al The entire scene with Mary and Julie had me so angry. Those bitches. D< Yamapi's anger and his frustration and the bit about the fight leaving him just a;lsdkng;asd It really makes me wonder what they go through when these sorts of things happen in real life. :( Poor boys. ♥

On the upside, lol. I lovelovelove the RyoPi. There was just so much in these chapters that was amazing. I love how they always seem to be watching the other

[chasing_spring]

Zomg, another amazing and long comment ♥ I love reading these, although I feel like a narcissist XD;

You know, sometimes I wonder if they even get talked to at all about papas pics, or whether their managers just issue an automatic "just friends" or "no comment" to the press.

I have to say I had a bit of sadistic joy writing Pi's emotional parts, because he always seems so composed and in control...so he kind of got doubly tortured...over and over and over again =( Sorry Pi =(

These are some of my favourite bits, because of how slow everything is. For them, everything's been a natural progression, but now a part of them thinks they have to work to preserve what they have before it progresses any further and they realise what's truly going on.

If Ryo is but a mere spoke in the turning wheel, then Pi is the axis, making the whole world spin.

You mentioned this line ♥ This is one of my favourites.

THANK YOU SO MUCH for writing all that ♥ I love you for it, you have no idea. It's so amazing, seriously. Thank you ♥

[tellytelly]

i love the parts where Pi stares at Ryo.
while in the car in the first part
and the other part where Ryo's sleeping..

Ryo is really too mesmerizing ne ^^

love your fic sooo much

[chasing_spring]

I think it would be difficult for anyone in that position ;D

Thank you <3

[brighterlove]

awww this started off all happy like and what not, then you kicked me in the gut with the angst.

Totally adore Yamapi being unable to stop staring at Ryo and finding everything about interesting(cause isn't that how love is. I love how they are slowly falling in love. my fave line is
"If Ryo is but a mere spoke in the turning wheel, then Pi is the axis, making the whole world spin." cause that's how it feels when you fall in love with someone as though they make your world spin. aww Ryo is slowly losing his fight. Poor Pi just like having everything all up in the air and slowly losing his mind, and the only thing keeping him sane is Ryo.

Oooh it sucks the scandal, all lies, oh and Management, can you say Master Bitches!