Two Hearts, One Soul Chapter Four

Feb 21, 2011 12:09

 Title: Two Hearts, One Soul

Rating: Hard R/nc-17 to be safe

Chapter: Given and Acquired

Summary: AU Jet survives Lake Laogai and Zuko sides with Team Avatar during the Crossroads of Destiny. But old prejudice and unresolved self hatred and shame are only some of the few obstacles facing these two. Jetko

Chapter Four )

jet/zuko a:tla, home

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lillithblack February 21 2011, 21:51:10 UTC
"And you will be DAMN HAPPY about it the entire freaking way!"
Awwwhhh...I love your Sokka Logic!

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chassie730 February 22 2011, 01:37:58 UTC
haha thanks! Sokka is probably one of my favorite characters to write, and despite all of his goofiness he really was the most logical of the group

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chassie730 February 22 2011, 01:41:15 UTC
Hehe, no one can resist superawkwardork!zuko

And don't worry, you are right there are definitely many things that need to get fixed with this chapter. My problem is I tend to write stream of consciousness when I'm fleshing out a chapter and no matter how many times I go back and fix it there is always some run on sentences. That and I'm a crappy editor. I'll go back and polish everything up when I finish writing it as long as the mechanics don't take away too much from the story.

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chassie730 February 28 2011, 22:50:01 UTC
haha I just love Sokka's character, I have a feeling I'm going to be using him a lot :)

And thankyou! Zuko is a character that has really always fascinated me, and there really are so many ways to analyze him so this is my take on him.

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chassie730 February 28 2011, 22:50:33 UTC
Thankyou! Hopefully if life doesn't get in the way I should be able to update regularly

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