Title: Two Hearts, One Soul
Rating: Hard R/nc-17 to be safe
Chapter: Given and Acquired
Summary: AU Jet survives Lake Laogai and Zuko sides with Team Avatar during the Crossroads of Destiny. But old prejudice and unresolved self hatred and shame are only some of the few obstacles facing these two. Jetko
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Awwwhhh...I love your Sokka Logic!
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And don't worry, you are right there are definitely many things that need to get fixed with this chapter. My problem is I tend to write stream of consciousness when I'm fleshing out a chapter and no matter how many times I go back and fix it there is always some run on sentences. That and I'm a crappy editor. I'll go back and polish everything up when I finish writing it as long as the mechanics don't take away too much from the story.
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And thankyou! Zuko is a character that has really always fascinated me, and there really are so many ways to analyze him so this is my take on him.
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