when love is all i can think of in my religion class

[chaste08]

I found this poem if it can be called as such when i re-opened my folder containing incomplete stories i made. It was written 3 years ago as I was sitting half-listening to my religion teacher. I had to edit it again because it sounded absurd and here the less absurd version. I didn't know whatelse to put in here for now so just to fill in the

Comments

[retronadya]

Did you really fell off the bridge?

Wow this is beautifully done. so poetic! compared to yours, mine sound really amateur
blergh

[chaste08]

haha...!! no didn't fell..just figuratively fell..lol...;P

thanks ...but i also think mine sounds amateurish ...i guess we have our own disappointments in our own creations...haha...!