One More Day Part II

May 30, 2007 21:37

Title: One More Day (Part II ( Read more... )

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blackeyedwicca June 3 2007, 03:01:24 UTC
Ohhhhhhhhh yay!!! That was AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!! Please tell me there will be more!!!!!! *gives puppy dog eyes* I loved it!!!

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karesu June 11 2007, 13:58:41 UTC
Im so glad you liked it!

I am still trying to decide what the terms of Chas coming back is though. I could do the sentemental thing and make it "I can only come back when John espresses his feelings for me" or something really weird. Any opinion on the matter would be helpful, and would cause me to write faster.

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blackeyedwicca June 11 2007, 23:05:06 UTC
Yeah i loved it!!

Hmmmmm Well maybe you could mix them both. Like have it be something that hints at John being honest with his feelings but have there be something else. U know you could make it really angst and have Chase's boyfriend(some guy he got as a sorta John filler) play a role like Chase wants to dump him and be with John but john is all he likes the boyfriend not me....and i'll shut up now cause im just being random lol. *shrugs sheepishly*

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anonymous July 20 2007, 17:49:46 UTC
I love this.
I suppose you could do something along the lines of: if Chas has something really important for him on Earth, then he's allowed to stay for it. Like true love or something.
Cheesy, I know, but I'm deperate for some more of this story.
Update soon please!
^^

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