Comments | chausten: [FIC] [OHSHC] I Gain Nothing

chausten

[FIC] [OHSHC] I Gain Nothing

Oct 14, 2011 17:34

I'm so tired I think I'm just going to mess around on LJ while I pretend to work. Brain has died. Maybe a treat later on to revive it.

Title: I Gain Nothing
Author: Chausten
Rating: PG
Category: Angst, Romance, Friendship
Pairing(s): Tamaki/Haruhi, sort of Kyouya/Haruhi
Spoilers: Drama eps 1-8
Timeline: Post-series (drama)

Summary: "Do you really ( Read more... )

[ship] tamaki/haruhi, fanfiction, [rating] pg, [genre] friendship, oneshot, [char] fujioka haruhi, [fandom] ouran high school host club, [char] ootori kyouya, [genre] romance, [char] suou tamaki, [fic] i gain nothing, [ship] kyouya/haruhi, [genre] angst

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chausten October 16 2011, 18:32:29 UTC

Haha, I do too. I want to write a real KyoHaru sometime, if I can get a good idea for a plot. I'm considering expanding this, but I may just end up starting a new fic.

ehrenyu October 16 2011, 13:36:43 UTC

It's okay. Personally it doesn't feel like they're very adult (which Haruhi would be if she graduated from Harvard Law. That takes years and years.) Sounds like they're in their 20s.

It was interesting how Kyouya implied he had gone to her rescue. However, when he kept saying that he didn't lose his glasses I got the impression that he was really saying he left them off because girls found him quite fetching without them on and had been truly hitting on her. The repetition of 'what's wrong?' wasn't that grating. For the most part it added an element of confusion to the whole piece.

I do wonder where you're going with this and hope you continue.

chausten October 16 2011, 18:35:11 UTC

Thanks for the comment. She actually hasn't graduated from Harvard, she's just been accepted. So she'd be, like, eighteen. I'm working a little on a continuation, but it sort of sucks (and when I say kind of, I mean really), so I might end up just starting another story.

But thanks again for your feedback. :)