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Fic: Showers salvage self-esteem

Aug 06, 2010 03:37

Title: Showers salvage self-esteem
Author: chauve_sourit
Characters: Bruce, Clark
Pairing: Bruce/Clark
Rating: NC-17 (!)
Warning: not beta-ed - point and I’ll rush to correct
Disclaimer: the boys aren’t mine, the story is
Words: 1768
Summary: “How would you feel if someone stripped off your armor without caring what you think and there you were, pretty ( Read more... )

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Comments 12

bradygirl_12 August 6 2010, 02:05:38 UTC

Well, that was hot! ;)

And interesting with Clark's reaction to his power loss. It was like the tables were turned with Bruce caring and hovering and Clark all snippy. ;)

chauve_sourit August 6 2010, 12:05:00 UTC

Hehehe, yeah! I'm a bit fed up with this super stereotypical view that Clarkie is the sweet one who has to calm down Bruce. Poor boy is only a human (well...) after all and needs to have bad days, too! ;)

Thanks for the comment! :D

northern_star August 6 2010, 02:11:09 UTC

Oh, god...shower sex. Excuse-me while I drool...

I about died laughing at the paper cut comment. ;) That was really cute!

And mmmm.... nice, and hot. Yum! And I like what you did with the end, it's really sweet and fun this way.

Reaaaaaaaaaaally liked this!!

chauve_sourit August 6 2010, 12:08:31 UTC

Hahaha - oh damn yes, shower sex is just... yummm! (I read it on someone's kink list and couldn't stop thinking about it ever since... way too hot!)

And yeah, the paper cut... my Clark is soooo much Dean Cain... :$ *drool*

Thanks for the comments - I'm really glad you liked this! :)

ladyblkrose August 6 2010, 02:36:19 UTC

Wow baby, I'm going to have to agree w/ Brady_Girl as I enjoy Bruce and Clark's total power exchange. Clark is now the moody, snarky, broody one and Bruce the optimist. Even in sex, Clark becomes the top/initiator and Bruce the bottom/reciver. I love that Bruce finally finds the right thing to say at the end.
Thank you for sharing

chauve_sourit August 30 2010, 22:12:53 UTC

Heee, thanks for the comments! (And I'm sorry that it took me this long to reply to them.... :S)

Boy, do I ever agree -- I think the guys don't know how well they fit each other's role if necessary... ;)

:D

hitokaji August 6 2010, 11:41:36 UTC

Ohh, so hot and yummy. I love how Bruce tried to do everything to make Clark feels better. It's just so sweet of him. :)

chauve_sourit August 30 2010, 22:07:31 UTC

(Okay, I'm really sorry that I hadn't replied earlier :( I know I read your comment back when you left it but I never got back to you... :S)

I toootally agree -- Bruce can be such a sweetheart and I bet it wasn't all that easy for him to give up the lead once in a while... but it was for a good cause. And it worked! ;)

mithen August 7 2010, 06:02:04 UTC

Poor Clark, he gets so growly and depressed when he doesn't have his powers. It's good to see Bruce taking care of him in his own Batty way. :)

chauve_sourit August 30 2010, 22:09:14 UTC

(I'm really soooo sorry that I didn't replied earlier :( I remember reading your comment back when you left it but I never got back to you... :S)

I knoooow! It must be so damn hard to lose something you took for granted. I'm really glad that he has his Bat to show him that there's more than just one way to be in charge. ;)

Thanks a bunch for the comment! :D