Fic: White Collar "Daybreak"

Mar 10, 2010 02:25

Title: Daybreak
Author: chayaasi
Rating: pg
Genre and/or Pairing: Peter/Elizabeth/Neal
Spoilers: none
Warnings: none
Summary: Elizabeth watches Neal leave.

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peter/neal/elizabeth, g, white collar, fanfiction

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elrhiarhodan March 10 2010, 11:43:34 UTC
Really, really nice. I love stories from Elizabeth's POV.

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chayaasi March 10 2010, 18:03:22 UTC
Thanks! I think El's POV is perfect for heartfelt pieces, just because of the kind and sincere way she views the world.

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sabaceanbabe March 10 2010, 14:55:20 UTC
Excellent fic. I look forward to more from you. :)

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chayaasi March 10 2010, 18:04:09 UTC
Thank you! And I hope to write more fic; these guys are staked out in my head now, lol.

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ursula4x March 10 2010, 15:19:21 UTC
I can see Neal withholding part of himself as being a barrier between Peter and Elizabeth and him.

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chayaasi March 10 2010, 18:10:17 UTC
One of my favorite parts in the series is when El goes to ask Neal to steal the tape that would cost Peter's career. It really made me realize how protective of Peter she is, especially as she reminds Neal what he owes Peter. I love OT3, but I'm convinced that while she would likely accept Neal as a lover, she'll withhold the soulmate title until he proves himself.

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tellitslant March 10 2010, 23:38:35 UTC
Oh, I really like this. El choosing to stay in bed with Peter, making Neal come to her, but still caring enough to try and get him to eat a proper breakfast... it rings really true to me.

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tellitslant March 11 2010, 14:45:30 UTC
Thank you! I liked that scene too, since I think it sums up just who El is sleeping with and who is her husband. I'm glad it was true to you.

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lefaym March 11 2010, 08:03:15 UTC
Mmm, this was lovely. :)

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chayaasi March 11 2010, 14:46:29 UTC
Thank you! Glad you liked it...and icon love XD!

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