Comments | chazper: Best Forgotten: A fic for Brandy (pt. 1)

chazper

Best Forgotten: A fic for Brandy (pt. 1)

Feb 13, 2009 12:41

HAPPY BIRTHDAY, BRANDY!

This is the kind of story that you do so well and I do not at all. But you wanted to read A nurse in a mental hospital discovers that a well-known missing person is being held there against their will. so just for you, here's a variation on that prompt. Of course, it's a WIP, and since I have about four of those already ( Read more... )

best forgotten

Comments 39

kazfloyd February 13 2009, 18:00:07 UTC

I am very intrigued. Can't wait for more.

chazper February 13 2009, 20:00:23 UTC

Thanks, but now I'm alarmed. I'll try to update (relatively soon), but as I warned, it may be a while.

jujuberry136 February 13 2009, 18:50:44 UTC

Looks awesome! Thanks for sharing with the rest of us!

chazper February 13 2009, 20:01:35 UTC

You're welcome. Glad you enjoyed.

60schic February 13 2009, 19:09:32 UTC

Arrrgh! Nooooooooooooooooo

Evilness is in the air and I don't like it. Not. One. Bit.

chazper February 13 2009, 20:02:12 UTC

Hee. I almost never write evil. It's kinda fun!

oc_gambit2 February 13 2009, 19:30:18 UTC

I am scared for our woobie. You write very very *very* evil Caleb- verrrry well.

Lovely job relating his disorientation and terror- rich description....such as "eyes desperate and glazed with entreaty" -- "searched for his voice, found it so rusty that it cracked in his throat" -- "Strange, gauzy sunshine"

chazper February 13 2009, 20:04:23 UTC

Well you know, Caleb just lends himself to this characterization.: ) Also, I'm thrilled that you liked some bits of the writing in this because I wasn't quite sure what I was doing with this kind of story.

brandywine421 February 13 2009, 20:02:38 UTC

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥

YAYS! Thanks, Chaz! I'm honored! And OMGINTRIGUED!!

chazper February 13 2009, 20:05:50 UTC

Oooh, you like?? *Does happy dance* Then my job here is done (except, you know, for finishing the story!)