Comments | chazper: Best Forgotten, a fic for Brandy (pt. 5 of ?)

chazper

Best Forgotten, a fic for Brandy (pt. 5 of ?)

May 30, 2009 20:13

I'm not caught up with reading-commenting, and I actually have some random RL news I'd like to share, but before any of that, I have to post this update. Why the urgency? Frankly, I just need to get it up before I lose the damn thing again. I finished this chapter yesterday, but when I returned to it today for some final revision (read: editing; it ( Read more... )

best forgotten

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finlee May 31 2009, 02:51:48 UTC

Wow Chaz, I think I'm freaking out more than Ryan! Awesome chapter, that's for sure!

chazper June 1 2009, 20:57:50 UTC

Wow? Really? Thanks, finlee!

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chazper June 1 2009, 21:02:53 UTC

I did drift into "first" territory there didn't I? And what, fax machines? Finger prints? What are those?

beachtree June 2 2009, 03:20:40 UTC

Well, if a remote facility has beyond EST devices designed to torture, they'd HAVE to be part of the phone age for a fax to communicate with the suppliers of their dastardly equipment and pharmaceutical comps! And Lucy used a phone, so... Just sayin.

(And it's not as if she COULDN'T give an instant physical description of Ryan, including unique, visible scars for proof- and a real Sandy wouldn't have demanded exact I.D.- with Ryan being in the dreaded system and all.) Yeah, I bring my work home with me!

You did drift into the first zone. I'm sure you never meant to open that can of worms you'd rather ignore.

fredsmith518 May 31 2009, 08:09:54 UTC

It was metal, and in its mirror-like surface he could glimpse his own reflection. Broken, distorted, its eyes glazed with pain, it barely resembled the self he believed himself to be. that is so sad and the despair so well rendered

what an ending...

chazper June 1 2009, 21:04:12 UTC

fred! I'm so glad that you're reading, but even happier just to hear from you. Our little LJ world misses you a lot.

beachtree May 31 2009, 08:11:19 UTC

It had to have taken a lot for Lucy to finally do the right, humane thing and act. She'd better not take three brief sentences as an answer, not when she already knows so much is wrong. Someone here has to use both head and heart. Surely there aren't just scarecrows, tin whatevers (and don't forget the lions since Caleb is both wicked witch and evil wizard- sharing the last title with Dr. Butcher), so that one of our heroines can see past the epidemic of hearsay and smokescreens ( ... )

smc36 May 31 2009, 14:36:55 UTC

and just when I was starting to feel relief for Ryan...
ouch.
:>)
Awesome angst.

chazper June 1 2009, 21:06:20 UTC

Coming from an angst master (mistress?) I take that as a major compliment. Thanks!