Best Forgotten, a fic for Brandy (pt. 6A of ?)

Jun 30, 2009 18:56

First of all a most HAPPY BIRTHDAY to the wonderful joey and impik. May you both enjoy years as amazing as you are ( Read more... )

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beege22 June 30 2009, 23:52:38 UTC
Still thrilling and creepy.

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chazper July 1 2009, 13:30:05 UTC
Well, as long as it's thrilling . . !

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jujuberry136 July 1 2009, 00:51:04 UTC
AHHHH! Sandy? Other PI? ANYBODY?

Someone needs to get Ryan out of there, pronot!

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chazper July 1 2009, 13:33:53 UTC
Ryan? Or Brandon? (*grins*)

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brandywine421 July 1 2009, 00:57:38 UTC
OMG.

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chazper July 1 2009, 13:38:01 UTC
Hee.

And glad you're still reading, brandy--even though, sorry, no boys in eyeliner in this fic!

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marsalka July 1 2009, 01:05:26 UTC
you and your evil cliffhangers!! aaaagh! :)

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chazper July 2 2009, 15:06:00 UTC
Sorry! Cliffhangers come with the territory for this kind of story, and evil is just fun. :)

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beachtree July 1 2009, 01:16:23 UTC
Clever use of mythology with some eerily appropriate references. Some of that would certainly appeal to Caleb in his S2 promo sort of attire as the epitomy of the man of leisure who never actually experiences leisure. All of life is a stage to him and every interaction is a scene is his one-man show. Egotistical bastard!

The infinity pool takes on a whole new twist with the descriptions and imagery so consistent with complete exhaustion, powerlessness and futility. But there's still that determination of an overthinking Ryan. For someone who can appear so still, he never stops in so many ways.

3 days max for an end to this grand, despicable injustice. There has to be a reality check at some point, even for people as clueless and inept as the Cohens, but I never had any faith in any of them. Caleb knowsthem and that he has room to manuever. That's just one more sad statement about Ryan's life.

Thanks for updating before the end of the month.

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chazper July 2 2009, 15:08:14 UTC
The mythology just kind of crept in, and I couldn't resist playing with the idea of an infinity pool. Glad you liked those bits.

I'll try to update in less than a month this time!

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