Comments | chazper: Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 8

chazper

Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 8

Aug 18, 2009 16:22

Well this is long. Very. It needs editing but I'm not going to bother, because hey, at least I can post a chapter before going back to work. Just a warning, though: if you plan to read, get yourself a drink and a very comfy chair ( Read more... )

best forgotten

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fredsmith518 August 18 2009, 21:28:07 UTC

wow, long indeed, loved that you brought in Trey and you caught all his complexity, his shifting emotions, as ever

much grring at your evil Cal, so cleverly drawn and so plausible and so good at emotional blackmail, shudders

“Of course I don’t care for Ryan the same way I care for Seth,” she admitted. “But that doesn’t change the fact that he is my child now. A parent can love two children differently--you do, Dad, with me and Hailey.” happy sigh.

and still some hope at the end.

chazper August 18 2009, 21:41:52 UTC

wow, long indeed,

I know! I should have posted this chapter in separate parts. That way I might have been able to claim more frequent updates. Ah well . . . Thanks for sitting through the reading marathon, fred. And yes, some hope at the end, if Lucy can just figure out what to do!

fredsmith518 August 18 2009, 21:45:57 UTC

Ah, no, the one lovely long read was a great treat!

I have faith in you and thus Lucy, but you are sneaky, in a good way...so no predictions:)

fredsmith518 August 18 2009, 21:46:55 UTC

and I love that I can 'hear' you saying 'I know'!

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chrisear August 18 2009, 22:13:07 UTC

the suspense is killing me... pls make them find him soon

chazper August 19 2009, 14:08:52 UTC

Well, all I can say right now is that they're on the trail--and maybe Caleb is getting a little sloppy?

loracj August 18 2009, 22:19:14 UTC

Wonderful update, Chaz. I also love that Sandy went to Trey to ask questions.....
I know all will be well eventually (right? RIGHT???), but in the meantime, poor woobie. And poor Cohens.

chazper August 19 2009, 14:06:00 UTC

You know me and the brothers Atwood! Trey had to slip in here somewhere (besides, it occurred to me that Sandy really should let him know what's going on with Ryan!)

All will be well eventually? Okay, define "well" . . . :)

finlee August 18 2009, 23:57:13 UTC

Really amazing update. You covered so much and still left me wanting more. Very suspenseful. I do hope poor Ryan gets rescued.....

chazper August 19 2009, 14:03:09 UTC

You still wanted more? finlee, you're a glutton for punishment! But thanks. I'm thrilled that you liked this.

lnhart August 19 2009, 01:06:23 UTC

Oh, breaking heart again. I love the Ryan/Lucy interactions.

Thanks.

chazper August 19 2009, 14:01:45 UTC

I'm always afraid that I'm falling into maudlin with Ryan and Lucy, so I'm very glad to hear that you like these bits. Thanks!