Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 8

[chazper]

Well this is long. Very. It needs editing but I'm not going to bother, because hey, at least I can post a chapter before going back to work. Just a warning, though: if you plan to read, get yourself a drink and a very comfy chair

Comments

[katwoman76]

As much as I wanted to read what's next, I stayed away from it all week. It was always too late at night and I was afraid, what new evils you would force on poor Ryan and what reading the new chapter would do to my own mind.
But now it's the weekend and I finally found the courage and am awake enough to read.

I sure as hell hope, that Sandy will not just go to SF with the family without some (unknown to Caleb) backup at home.
And they should do a wordwide background check on the fake name Caleb offered so freely.

And Lucy really needs to listen to the numbers Ryan is repeating over and over again and use them to finally get him out of their.

The broken words followed her. They echoed in her own voice, pursuing her as she left the clinic, gaining strength and purpose with each repetition.
“You can’t let them, Lucy.”

So let me repeat them some more for you in hope you finally hear my pleading.

You can’t let them, chazper!Get Ryan out of there! Away from the drugs and restraints and evil hurtful tests and "doctors" who want to

[chazper]

More as soon as I can, kat! I'm working on it, really. But you know, you really are so unfair to poor Caleb. He's not trying to kill Ryan, just, you know, obliterate him. (Although if the operation should go wrong, well . . .) As for Kirsten--now kat, he's her father. Surely Caleb knows what's best for her?

*ducks and scurries away to do some writing*

[katwoman76]

obliterate him
That counts as killing him in my book. *glare*

if the operation should go wrong, well ...
not just if it should go wrong, also if it should have the caleb-desired effect.

*scurries away to get some sleep* (something I should have done 2 hours ago aleady *sigh*

[mel39]

If that man had an ounce of humanity he'd be thinking of his family and how upset they are *shudders*. I hope Sandy is planning something crafty.

[chazper]

An ounce of humanity? You're asking a lot of the Caleb in this story! But Sandy might come through for you.

[famous99]

great read. even if i did do it in bits and pieces.

[chazper]

I'm amazed you had enough bits and pieces of time to wade through this! But thanks for reading, famous.

[anonymous]

Ooooh man! I just recently stumbled along this fic, and I could not stop reading it!! :) I am so on the edge of my seat. Plese update as soon as possible! It is hard to find interesting, and unique OC fanfics these days!

[chazper]

Glad you enjoyed this. I'm working on the next bit. It should be up . . . well, soon I hope.

[sportsmed14]

Wow.