Comments | chazper: Best Forgotten, (pt. 10 of ?)

chazper

Best Forgotten, (pt. 10 of ?)

Nov 29, 2009 19:22

Sigh. It seems I have this compulsion to post at least one fic update a month no matter how pitiful that story/chapter might be. So, since it's almost December, here's the next bit of "Best Forgotten." I wish I could do better for those of you still reading OC fic, but this is all I could manage.

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best forgotten

Comments 18

rose_in_texas November 30 2009, 01:18:25 UTC

Poor Ryan. I do love his insecurities in this and how they ring true to the character, even though this is AU.

chazper November 30 2009, 17:14:47 UTC

Thanks, rose. It's good to know Ryan is still believable in this--especially since it's taking me so long to write!

fifimom November 30 2009, 02:46:46 UTC

Thanks so very much for the update! This is by far the most evil Caleb I've ever read but I love this story.

chazper November 30 2009, 17:16:05 UTC

I really did take Caleb to the dark side, didn't I? It's rather scary how much fun he is to write that way.

beachtree November 30 2009, 03:08:39 UTC

Okay, I've stopped choking after reading about "Mr. Nichol's compassionate intervention." I might live to eat again. Maybe ( ... )

zbyszko November 30 2009, 03:30:15 UTC

What a great surprise to find an update tonight. Nasty, nasty Caleb. I hope that you give him a suitable come-uppance soon.

jujuberry136 November 30 2009, 12:41:28 UTC

This is so CREEPY! Caleb is such an evil manipulative jerk and I'm keeping my fingers crossed Nurse Lucy can get Ryan out of there in time.

Thanks for sharing!