Comments | chazper: Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 11

chazper

Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 11

Jan 24, 2010 19:12

Yikes! So long since I updated this story, but for those of you still interested in Evil!Caleb, here's the next chapter.

You know the drill. Still AU. And the characters--well, the Cohen and Caleb--still not mine.

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best forgotten

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jujuberry136 January 25 2010, 01:34:39 UTC

Cohen plan to get Ryan back? Activated.
Lucy seeing the light? Pretty much.

So all lights are go for a Cohen + One reunion :)

I'm keeping my fingers crossed Ryan's rescued soon!

chazper January 25 2010, 11:49:30 UTC

At the rate I update, your fingers may get cramped! But thanks so much for reading.

famous99 January 25 2010, 01:51:15 UTC

What a cliff hanger. Though I'm glad things are finally coming together. What a fantastic tale you've woven!

chazper January 26 2010, 18:56:22 UTC

Thanks, famous. I'm thrilled that you're still reading. (All Seth scenes are in your honor!)

beachtree January 25 2010, 03:13:51 UTC

Talk about a multi-layered nightmare to rival a trip courtesy of Dante. There are metaphors within metaphors for a tortured Ryan, and he's definitely caught in the tentacles of an ongoing nightmare. His state of consciousness might change, but that's no consolation when there's no escape, just changing players and images. The constant is that he's the outsider, struggling alone, under attack, and with his pleas unheard ( ... )

chazper January 26 2010, 19:02:21 UTC

Well, there are steps being taken, definitely. As for where they lead? Well . . . But "Dr. Killer"--hee! I must remember that when (if) the Cohens ever confront the good doc.

And an undependable ISP? You mean like mine, and the comments I never received to the last chapter? Grr. But thank you for these, beach. You always make me want to continue writing. Can you also provide the time?

beachtree January 27 2010, 02:15:20 UTC

Don't be a tease, or I will stop make you want to continue writing and I won't even pretend to provide you with the time. Of course, I sleep standing up like a horse (but for maybe 3 hours), so you're so coming to the wrong place.

I don't know if you have an AOL address as your LJ responder, but that seems to have as many issues as most beloved ISPs. Good times.

Dr. Killer was just too much of an easy switch. Just a simple typo- but not- says it all.

zbyszko January 25 2010, 04:10:27 UTC

Yay for an update. I hope that Lucy has good computer skills!

chazper January 26 2010, 20:29:00 UTC

I'm sure they're better than mine at least!

Thanks for reading. :)

oc_gambit2 January 25 2010, 06:28:45 UTC

gahhhhhh! That dream was tough to read. My muscles tensed up so much I feel like I was swimming with him....

Go Lucy!

chazper January 27 2010, 00:19:49 UTC

She's going! Let's just hope she works faster than I do!