Best Forgotten, a fic for Brandy (pt. 12 of ?)

[chazper]

We had a snow day on Friday. Yay! It was called late, after I'd already gotten up, exercised, showered, and dressed for work and of course I did have to spend several hours of my surprise free day shoveling (our driveway had to be cleared four times, taxing even my enthusiasm, and I rather like shoveling.) Still, I got to spend a chunk of the

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What??? No!!

[chicletinho]

Oh, come on... you can't stop like this! There must be a law somewhere about mean cliffhangers...
please update soon (tomorrow sounds great), it's saving Ryan time!!!!!!!! :)

Re: What??? No!!

[chazper]

Um . . . definitely no update tomorrow! But I'll try not to keep you waiting long. (If it's any consolation, I already have some of the next chapter written.)

Anyway, thanks for reading and responding.

[beachtree]

I'm glad you got a snow day.

You're really a horrible tease, with cryptic notes that spell it all out- albeit in shorthand, having Kirsten grow one vertebrate in hopes of an eventual spine, Sandy learning basic math combined with geography, and Seth almost learning to use a filter and his ears (and thinking about someone other than himself for 2 minutes straight). Lucy even had a Net connection. Then, the cruel blow. Only a tsunami, earthquake, or hurricane (I forgot what month it is) might buy poor Ryan some time now, although I fear it's all up to him and Lucy. If you wait another month, you'll surpass heartless.

[chazper]

Horrible tease? Surpass heartless? beach, I don't know whether to be flattered or insulted!

[beachtree]

Be flattered, of course, but also inspired and kind (to us and Ryan). Spare no cruelty when it comes to Caleb (the smug shall suffer) and Dr. Killer. Keller? No, not Killer- not really.

If Lucy comes through (and she'd better), she deserves to be the one to set Killer/Keller adrift on his own Viking funeral flotilla or signing the papers to have him locked away sporting a lovely straight jacket. Then she can take a much-needed spa vacation and rethink her career plans. Ryan and Sandy can have dibbs on Caleb with Charlie's help.

[fredsmith518]

my goodness!
super update, most fast moving, plus the totall eep! at the end

[chazper]

Thanks, fred. I'm glad you liked the pace. I think it turned out so fast because I was rushing to finish before March!

[katwoman76]

Are you trying to kill me here?
I'm sure you are. Because this - is not funny anymore.
And please tell me we don't have to wait another month to find ou more. That's cruel and evil.

[chazper]

kat, really! Would I try to kill you? I'm just writing what my muse dictates. Blame her sick addiction to suspense. But I'll try to make her rush the next chapter. Will that help?

[jujuberry136]

So many pieces coming together, but now Ryan's gone? And the procedure sounds like it's going full steam ahead. Yikes!!

Loved the new chapter, thanks for posting!

[chazper]

but now Ryan's gone? Well, you didn't think this would be easy for the Cohens and Lucy, did you?

Thanks for reading and responding!