Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 13

Mar 31, 2010 18:30

Disclaimer:You already know, the characters (well, the main ones!) aren't mine. And you may vaguely remember this evil!Caleb story. On and on it goes . . .

Best Forgotten, Part 14 (14? Seriously?)
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60schic April 2 2010, 04:34:00 UTC
I'm....they're....he....you....

Jesus, woman - get Kiki with the program already and onto a friggin plane to Mexico. Dr. Killer must be stopped. Like, NOW!

You must have Spring Break very soon, and you obviously have plans to finish this fic then, right? Note the words *finish* and *soon*. Much as I love your writing, and I so do, and I could read your fic forever, but I need a conclusion. Lucy needs to make contact ASAP.

Jeez, I'm never gonna get to sleep tonight .........

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chazper April 7 2010, 20:49:29 UTC
Hee. I am indeed on spring break and I've actually scheduled some writing time tomorrow. Now if only something more enjoyable doesn't get in the way, because I kind of need a conclusion to this story too! It was never supposed to go this long.

Sweet dreams, Chic! :)

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60schic April 7 2010, 22:49:06 UTC
Thrilled to hear you'll be writing. I have 2 more days till Spring Break. I have no such writing planned :(

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chazper April 7 2010, 20:53:43 UTC
What a lovely sentiment! Thank you. I have to admit, Ben is becoming Ben Sherman to me too, but like you I really loved Ryan, so I have to keep writing. I can't just abandon him there in the clinic.

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katwoman76 April 10 2010, 18:51:27 UTC
You are killing me here.
I admit, I didn't even have the guts to read the latest chapter until now.

*shaking with fear here*

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katwoman76 April 12 2010, 18:01:06 UTC
Aw, I don't mean to be killing you, kat! Aren't you feeling any hope? After all, the Cohens and Lucy are starting to figure out what's going on. Of course, the question is, will they put the last pieces together in time . . .

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mel39 April 18 2010, 09:13:22 UTC
Awesome update, I love how suddenly Kirsten has the realisation from the memory. Yikes!

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chazper April 19 2010, 16:17:57 UTC
Wel, it's about time somebody got a clue! Now they just have to figure out how to tie the threads together--which I guess means I have to too.

Again, thanks for reading, mel.

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famous99 May 12 2010, 17:47:24 UTC
The memory is so chilling. I just love how you weave the all the pieces together and let the mystery unfold. Even if there is a bit of dramatic irony going on here. This is quite suspenseful.

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chazper May 13 2010, 20:16:09 UTC
Dramatic irony? Really? Oh, famous, would I do that?

Again, though, thanks for reading and for your kind words.

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