Best Forgotten, a Fic for Brandy, Pt. 14

Apr 30, 2010 22:51

Getting this in just under the wire (meaning the end of the month.) I've actually written about 1,000 words more of this story, but that part isn't finished, so I decided just to incorporate it in the next (final? No, probably not) chapter. So, for now, here is part 14 ( Read more... )

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mel39 May 2 2010, 18:02:51 UTC
You got my hopes up...and then you dashed them. *clutches hands*

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chazper May 4 2010, 12:33:53 UTC
Aw, I'm sorry! But what's a cliffhanger without peril and suspense?

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fifimom May 3 2010, 04:43:31 UTC
very sad but again very good update. big hug and thanks for you.

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chazper May 4 2010, 12:34:53 UTC
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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famous99 May 13 2010, 12:56:38 UTC
Wonderful! I felt so bad for Kirsten as the realization of what her father is capable of hits her. And poor Ryan... he's also starting to realize that hope is slim. A very gut-wrenching chapter. I hope there's more...

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