Best Forgotten, a fic for Brandy (pt. 15 of ?)

[chazper]

This chapter is dedicated to famous99 in honor of her birthday. I'm sorry I missed the actual date, famous, but I hope it was amazing and I wish you a most wonderful year

Comments

[silverweave]

Cohens to the rescue! Like the dynamic here and Charley too is a good believable omc, fitting in nicely. I like the increased sense of urgency and the clock ticking down, eeek! Great stuff chuck, look forward to the next chapter.

[chazper]

Silver! You're reading this? Aw thanks! I'm flattered.

[famous99]

Right on the date. My birthday is the 31st :) Thanks so much for the lovely present. I just loved how each of the Cohens flashed to their memories of Ryan. A mix of joy, sadness, and comfort, I think.
I felt like Seth while reading this chapter, with my foot on the accelerator. I can't wait for an update!

[sportsmed14]

Happy birthday! :D It's great to have Chazper write an awesome update for you on your b-day. How sweet. :)

[chazper]

Yay! At least this wasn't a belated gift. And I'm thrilled that you found time to read on your special day. May your whole year be beyond wonderful!

[jujuberry136]

Ahhh! Cohens are getting there- I just wish they'd get there faster! There's still so much in the air. Love Seth and Kristen's reflections.

Thanks for sharing!

[chazper]

You're welcome! Thank you for reading.

[lnhart]

Love the update. I can't wait for the reunion scene...I hope there's a reunion scene...but I'm thoroughly enjoying the build-up.

[chazper]

I'm thoroughly enjoying the build-up.

I'm glad, since it's taking me so long to get to the point of this story!

[sportsmed14]

Okay, so this may seem crazy, but I read this entire story today. It's amazing!!!!!!!!!!!! Soooo good. I love the psychological component of your writing. You really get inside everyone's head. Also, the suspense is incredible. I literally feel like I am reading a mystery. Poor Ryan! I can't wait until you update this! I know you're busy, but please update soon! I can't wait until Lucy and the Cohens find Ryan! I only hope they can get to him on time!

PS- Happy Memorial Day!!!!!

[chazper]

I can't believe you tackled this epic in one day. What endurance!

I'll have about a week between the end of this school year (last day, this Thursday!) and going on vacation, so I'm going to try to write the next part then. No promises though, but I definitely do appreciate you reading. Thanks!