Best Forgotten, Part 20.

Oct 31, 2010 13:00

Trick or treat. You decide. Anyway, just in time for Halloween, here's this month's chapter of my AU OC horror story. But sorry, no zombies here. And yes, I'm still borrowing the characters Josh.

Best Forgotten, Part 20
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chicletinho October 31 2010, 21:35:28 UTC
Ouch! This is just... cruel :(

But, considering Halloween, I forgive you.

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chicletinho October 31 2010, 21:49:20 UTC
PS: Thank you for the update!! I didn't mean to sound ungrateful...

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chazper November 2 2010, 23:38:12 UTC
Aw, you didn't! And you're right; it was rather cruel. I blame Caleb--he's making me do it!

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marsalka October 31 2010, 21:49:15 UTC
aaaaagghhhh! turn off the phone!!?? are they crazy?! ulp. evil evil cliffhangers...

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chazper November 2 2010, 23:39:24 UTC
Evil? And here I thought cliffhangers were such fun! Anyway, thanks for reading :)

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anne35 November 1 2010, 19:40:55 UTC
I see the mean Halloween spirits have gotten their claws into you. That was very cruel of you to tease us with the possibility of a phone call. However, I do LOVE knowing that it does mean the story will go on for at least a little while longer. I don't know what I would do without my monthly angst fix.

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chazper November 2 2010, 23:42:00 UTC
My angst come from writing it! The end of the month approaches and I start thinking "Eep! I need to get this done!" But I'm very glad that you're enjoying the story. (Only if this is your fix, does that make me your pusher?)

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lnhart November 1 2010, 22:55:38 UTC
At first I was admiring your awesome author brain for thinking of the perfect way for Lucy to get the doctor to listen to her. Yes! Appeal to his professional pride. Make him listen.

And then I was not so happy with your awesome author brain for thinking of that perfect cliffhanger. ;-)

Thanks for the update! Can't wait for more Cohen goodness.

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chazper November 2 2010, 22:16:05 UTC
Thank you, especially for admiring the strategy Lucy used to get Dr. Keller to listen to her (at least until Caleb interrupted.) It did take a while to come up with that plan for her!

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60schic November 2 2010, 04:18:42 UTC
OMG - now I know for sure that you're trying to kill me. I'm so tensed up that I can`'t even tell you how much I enjoyed the little Seth moments and movements here, or how dead on you have the Magnificent Bastard's voice down.

I can only hope that since your next deadline will be around Thanksgiving, you'll toss us a positive bone (drumstick, please) and let the Cohens find him...........

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chazper November 2 2010, 23:45:18 UTC
Oh you're right! It is November already--a short month, so I should already be writing. But are you sure you want a positive bone for Thanksgiving? Maybe just some over-seasoned stuffing instead?

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60schic November 3 2010, 03:02:33 UTC
No, no - I want a substantial positive bone...or maybe you can distract me with mashed potatoes and gravy......

On another topic, I actually wrote the first paragraph for Intervention4.

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chazper November 4 2010, 18:18:33 UTC
Yay!

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