Best Forgotten, Part 21.

[chazper]

Yes, I'm still slogging alone with this story, but it's been a very hectic month, so I'm afraid this short and unsatisfying installment was the best I could manage. And at that it took me until the very last day to get it done! But for what it's worth, here is

Best Forgotten, Part 21(And yes, it's still wildly AU, ands I still claim none of Josh's

Comments

[finlee]

So close! You do know how to draw out the suspense! Great chapter. I'm so glad Ryan is almost safe...or is he? Update soon! Ryan only has a half hour left!

[beachtree]

Forget 88 Minutes, Ryan has maybe 30- give or take on Cozumel/"island" time. However, with this inept bunch, every nano-second is precious. Again, Lucy and Charlie have the brains, not trains to stay close to some kind of track.

There's that heartbreaking thought from Lucy about not paying attention and not listening to Ryan. After all, hasn't that been so much at the center of Ryan's life no matter where he's been? Then there's the broken trust. Another biggee that is so much a part of who Ryan is- if he's still Ryan and still will be after the Cohen's ongoing debacle in Newport and extended tour of Cozumel.

Thanks for updating despite all the holiday hurdles! Please don't abandon the poor boy for another year!

[marsalka]

hooray!! two people who need to talk... but what a place to stop! you and your evil cliffhangers have me at the edge of my seat :)

[lnhart]

Yay! Sandy and Lucy are finally connecting. (I hope.)

Can't wait for more.

[oc_gambit2]

aaaahhhhhh! I owe you about a gazbillion comments on this most excellent suspense fic, but for now, to heck with that, just: this is great! Lovely twist having Charlie twig on the cell-phone shutdown. I can *feel* Lucy's paralyzing fear and emotional exhaustion ["She couldn’t bear to be cut off again"] at war with her fierce determination to do what she can for Ryan