Best Forgotten, Part 28. And still not "The End".

[chazper]

30 days hath December, April, June . . . Wait, June? And it's already the 30th? Damn! My only excuse for another not-the-end update is that I've been taking classes since school let out. (Must do it to renew my license, and I rather enjoy them but--homework

Comments

[zbyszko]

How will I know that the month is over when you finish this story? : )

Love that Caleb is finally feeling the effects of his actions. And that there is, at least, another chapter coming at the end of next month..........

[chazper]

I'm wondering how I'll mark the end of the month myself! First, though, I have to finish this epic.

I'm so glad you enjoyed Caleb's consequences--more to come on that front!

[jassylou]

Another "AWESOME" chapter chaz. You are really proving yourself has the "MISTRESS of SUSPENSE".

You can't improve on perfection and chapter after chapter you are doing just that!

I loved the vision of the Cohens in front of an orange sunset the dust flying up from their scurrying feet.

Bravo!! "take a bow girl!!" I'm just loving it and it's unique insight of raw emotions in all of the characters.

Big Hugs girl.(g) You rock!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! thankyou so much

[chazper]

You are too flattering, jassy, but you made my day (week/month)! Thank you so much.

[fredsmith518]

very very powerful - you know Kirsten was my 'get inside her head' character and boy did you! more on that later

all those occasions when he had to find a way to manipulate the truth in order to survive.

Because, Caleb knew, lies wouldn’t serve him anymore. this also, the man having no clue what truth is, seeing it only as skating smoothly and confidently on the thin edges of truth not realising that comprise = actual lies

No, Sandy. Let him talk. I want to hear what he has to say.” this rang absolutely true for me, that she would want to know finally the extent of his doing and reasoning

all the way through, you play with the nonds of family, children regressing, Seth pulling Kirsten like a younger child, Caleb attempting to find the child with unconditional love inside Kirsten - watching Caleb attempting to manipulate Kirsten, it crossed my mind that he might be throwing back to the way that he'd treated her mother

A long moment, fraught with lies and warped history and the burden of family, spun a sticky web around all of

[chazper]

I always think of you when I write Kirsten, and I always wonder if you'll think I did her justice. I am so, so glad that you did, especially because this was such a touchy chapter.

The fact that you took time to note ongoing themes and quote lines thrills me. I appreciate it--and you--more than I can say. Thank you so much.

And now off to work on the final paper I have due Friday!

[fredsmith518]

it is a pleasure to read your updates, and the last 2 fell on Saturdays, which meant more time to comment, absolute pleasure to have the time to read in detail, I love seeing the layers in your work:D good luck with the deadline - I need to work soon!