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chazper

Best Forgotten 30

Sep 19, 2011 16:10

I give up. Trying to rewrite the lost (last) chapter of this story is driving me crazy. I can't remember exactly what I wrote or how I got to the end, and now the silly, endless epic is stretching out even more. Conversations and scenes snuck in here that didn't exist before, but now I can't seem to get rid of them and I've decided to stop trying. ( Read more... )

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finlee September 20 2011, 02:30:48 UTC

Yeah! They're finally reunited - now wake up fully Ryan!

chazper September 25 2011, 13:17:49 UTC

Next chapter, I promise.

Thanks for reading.

zbyszko September 20 2011, 03:17:16 UTC

And, sadly, it ends with another TBC.

Sad for you maybe, but not for me since I love your stories and this means that there is, at least, one more chapter to look forward to. And unlike George RR Martin, I know it won't be 6 years until the next part. : )

chazper September 25 2011, 13:20:10 UTC

I'm so pleased that you're still enjoying this stretched-out saga. And yes, I think I can manage to update without a 6 year delay!

beachtree September 20 2011, 06:11:15 UTC

I'm sorry to be rushing and I apologize for being semi-coherent, but it's the end of a very long day and a new one's starting in a matter of a few hours. How did that happen again ( ... )

chazper September 25 2011, 13:28:45 UTC

Do-overs are horrible! (shudders) At least this taught me to take my own advice and back-up everything. (And it did give me an excuse to buy my new MacAir, which is wonderfully light.)

Anyway, thank you for all your kind words about this chapter. I'm especially pleased that Ryan was still present for you since I realized that for a main character, he's been absent from this story (physically or at least in terms of consciousness) a lot! And I'm so glad you like Lucy. I've enjoyed writing her.

As always, I appreciate all your thoughtful, supportive comments. Thanks so much for sticking with this story.

loracj September 20 2011, 09:41:40 UTC

Personally, I'm fine with a TBC - especially after such a wonderful chapter. Lucy's impressions combined with the Cohens' reaction - sigh. Just great.

Now we just need Ryan to wake up, Cal to drop dead, and the Cohens to go home - maybe they can take Lucy with them?

chazper September 25 2011, 13:34:55 UTC

Thanks for all your kind words. As for your wish list . . . Hmm. I don't know about Cal dropping dead (although it is an appealing thought) but your suggestion about Lucy is intriguing. After all, she probably will need a new job after all this is over. :)

loracj September 26 2011, 08:59:50 UTC

See, that's just what I was thinking. Lucy will need a job, and Ryan will need nursing care for the foreseeable future (as opposed to being just fine, like on TV)......

philippa_ September 20 2011, 15:19:29 UTC

Ooh the bit we've been waiting for!! Yay! Love it. Thanks so much for this, can't wait for the next bit :D

chazper September 25 2011, 13:37:15 UTC

Thank you for reading and responding! I'm working on the next part (and saving it on a flash drive just in case!)