The Real LJ Idol - Mini-Season - Week 9

Feb 12, 2016 19:54

This is my entry for Week 9 of LJ Idol (
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witchwife February 13 2016, 02:10:21 UTC
I loved this. I loved your descriptions, the whole concept, and especially the ending.

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dmousey February 13 2016, 04:22:50 UTC
This had some pretty cool dialogue! I knew you had to have used the name Tenshi due to Manga... my daughter and son have read, written watched so much. I liked how the romantic bits were handled and it's hoopeful ending! Wish us luck fellow Norby! Peace~~~ D

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rayaso February 13 2016, 17:45:43 UTC
This was wonderful! I loved the Afterlife you created, and the creative use of the prompt. I also enjoyed your description of the ice cream -- now I want some!

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halfshellvenus February 14 2016, 00:44:27 UTC
What a really neat concept for an Afterlife-- and I can see why memories and experiences would be valuable, not for a creepy reason but because that's the only way to encounter something new in a potentially eternal existence. Think how you would come to crave that!

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alycewilson February 14 2016, 17:45:08 UTC
I liked this very much. I could tell from the descriptions that it was based on manga. The story drew me in.

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