The Real LJ Idol - Mini-Season - Week 16

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The Real LJ Idol - Mini-Season - Week 16
This is my entry for Week 15 of LJ Idol (

Comments

[rayaso]

At first I thought the narrator might be a female serial killer, but this was so much better! The victim was fairly repulsive, so I hope he made a tasty meal. I like the fact that you did not describe the monster/sister, leaving that to our imagination. Great job!

[whipchick]

So much creepiness! What a great twist at the end, too.

"my hooded eyes filled with what I know will appear to be lust" - makes me think about how we all assume we're great judges of character...

[alycewilson]

I, too, thought that she was the monster, so it was surprising when the monster turned out to be her sister. Well done!

[lrig_rorrim]

Creepy and great! :D