fic: there's only one thing i can start

Oct 14, 2010 01:01

Title: there's only one thing i can start
Characters: Kirk/McCoy
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 2946
Fandom: STXI
Warnings: Rimming.
Summary: Companion fic to if i could just crash here tonight, from McCoy's point of view.
Disclaimer: I own nothing, pretty much. Title from gin blossom's 'hey jealousy'.

--( he's pretty sure jim's been doing something funny with his sheets... )

rating: ncc-1701, pairing: kirk/mccoy, fandom: star trek 2009

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shameless_klutz October 14 2010, 21:02:38 UTC
Ah! Perfect companion piece!

Btw... I'd love to see more of these boys... I love how you write them!

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checkerboxed October 16 2010, 00:58:26 UTC
aw, thanks!
honestly, i pretty much write them the same in all my fics, so...
/shameless self-promotion. :D

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shameless_klutz October 17 2010, 03:47:48 UTC
*runs off to investigate further* :)

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joeannk October 16 2010, 04:02:53 UTC
I like the idea that Kirk sneaks into Bones' bed on nights when he's alone. And I especially like that Bones figures it out and doesn't freak out about it. Not only does he not freak out but it inspires quite the interesting and hot dream ;o) Nicely done. Do write more!

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checkerboxed October 17 2010, 01:53:00 UTC
thanks for the comment! i'm glad you liked it. :)

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sangueuk October 17 2010, 00:54:42 UTC
this was so sweet - and I liked the added bits of slap-stick too!

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checkerboxed October 17 2010, 01:55:33 UTC
thanks! what's a jim/bones without some good slapstick, huh? :D

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anonymous November 6 2010, 21:00:12 UTC
I thought this was very good, the only thing that made me cringe a little was when you said Jim touched Len's prostate with his tongue. It is physically impossible to reach the prostate with your tongue, unless you that guy from KISS of course lol.

It just irks me when things aren't realistic. Other than that, the fic was beautifully written. Great job!

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checkerboxed November 7 2010, 02:45:46 UTC
rut roh! i don't personally have a prostate, so i guess i just assumed! thanks for pointing that out, i'll fix that immediately!

i totally understand about that being a pet peeve--i'm the same way. :)

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rubynye November 11 2010, 18:19:01 UTC
So I decided to see what else you've written, and found this astonishing gem of a love story. *applauds, greatly impressed*

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checkerboxed November 12 2010, 03:24:58 UTC
D: STOP IT YOU ARE MAKING ME BLUSH.
seriously, thanks. :)

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