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checkinyourbra

In Good Taste [Part Four]

May 19, 2018 00:01

Title: In Good Taste [Part Four]
Pairing(s): YulTi

Rating/Genre: PG-13 + Language; Coming Out, Girl-Meets-Girl

Disclaimer: I don’t own Soshi. I don’t own anyone, in fact. All Fiction.

Warning(s): None come to mind.

Author’s Notes: We’re in Tiffany’s head for this chapter! It’s been rainy all week in NYC, but it provides a nice editing (and napping) mood ( Read more... )

tiffany, fic, yulti, yuri, au, snsd, pg-13

Comments 16

wondertae13 May 19 2018, 05:10:35 UTC

Aaaaaa the harshness... oh that ended so coldly just when I thought Yuri could manage not to mess it up completely 🙈
I love love Tiffany thank you for her mind~ She’s so real,. how does she go from soft to icy in a second ihh a background of getting hurt... and the friends time with Yoona and Hyo was so much fun to read because what’s with Yoona hahahahaha
So thank you thank you I’m loving this <33 feels

checkinyourbra June 1 2018, 07:39:20 UTC

WonderTaaaeeee. Haaaayyyy

Yuri has a knack for getting the worst out of a sweet person like Tiffany. Tsk, tsk.

"I love love Tiffany thank you for her mind~ She’s so rea;"-- You know, I love her, too. She really is gf goals.

What's with Yoona?! hahahhah that's a real laugh from me. Isn't she something??

Thanks you for the love, thank you for the feels~~~ <33

yuukistar22 May 19 2018, 06:32:41 UTC

YAYYYYY I AM NOT AS LATE AS USUAL

yuukistar22 May 30 2018, 14:18:03 UTC

YASS GURL I AM READY FOR THE DRAMAZ. Also, super excited for Tiffany's perspective, but I can tell shit is gonna get REAL ( ... )

checkinyourbra June 1 2018, 07:50:26 UTC

1. CONGRATS ON THE EARLY SPOT. I KNEW YOU COULD DO IT ( ... )

fortytwodegrees May 21 2018, 02:46:25 UTC

Oohuhu~ that was intense! Glad Tiffany called Yuri on her shit though. I can really empathize with Tiffany. I tend to be "emotionally available" to my own detriment, but I draw a hard line at hurting others, no matter their intentions. So let me say again that I'M IN LOVE WITH THIS TIFFANY!!!! Hardworking, soft, ambitious, kind, nurturing, courageous, self-aware, all the things!!!! UrrrGghhhh!!! ...... 🚨🚑🚨 ....
Sorry, sorry. That just gushed out, unbidden.
(But I'll keep it just in case it's at all amusing to you lol 😂)

I snorted at that gold star comment and cackled over the demons of Tiffany's dating past. Taeyeon as a simultaneous vajayjay whisperer/emotional vampire sounds like one of those impossible "would you rather" hypotheticals 🤔

I'm really curious how Yuri thought this was gonna go. (She probably wasn't thinking all that much though, she's such a mess 😢) Can't wait to take a peek into her head 🤗

🎶*Thanks*〰️*for*〰️*writing*〰️🎶

checkinyourbra June 1 2018, 08:03:41 UTC

I was going for intense. ;) Like you, I think I fall under the “emotionally available” category, too. We really must protect ourselves because our hearts get all gooey and our brains go on hold.

MORE LOVE FOR THIS TIFFANY.

Hardworking, soft, ambitious, kind, nurturing, courageous, self-aware, all the things!!!! UrrrGghhhh!!! ...... 🚨🚑🚨- YES TO ALL OF THIS. I love the emojis here. They really do go along with her character. Something’s so sexy about a woman who has it together, right? I LOVE THE GUSHING, NO WORRIES. And you used ‘unbidden’ here. Loveeee that word! :33 ( ... )

seoyoonyul May 24 2018, 00:39:06 UTC

Whoa, didn't expect to read from Tiffany's view and for her to know Yuri's reality this soon ( ... )

checkinyourbra June 1 2018, 08:17:59 UTC

It is I, Checks, serving you the unexpected! When I outlined this story, both their perspectives moved the story along best and I’m glad I chose to do that.

Omg I want to quote so much in your comment. This: “we can't control growing feelings, so even if she had always felt for people too fast, she just can't help it. She felt it, then she felt it.”

^^^THIS IS TIFFANY TO A T. She really can’t help her open heart~

I’ve mentioned this before, but Yuri is a character that I find the most difficult to write. But, I think something that works very well for a realistic portrayal of her is this unintentional method of hurting others. I can’t see her as a straight up-meanie for this, so being irresponsible badly affects others.

“Or does it hurt more knowing the person didn't mean to hurt, but eventually still hurt her?” - //exploding brain ( ... )

anonymous May 24 2018, 13:16:23 UTC

Ahhhhhhh OUCH MY HEART!!! Damnit that was a hard chapter. Ugh just do it, Yuri!! Be with Tiffany - if you haven’t ruined it already :(

checkinyourbra June 1 2018, 07:52:27 UTC

Your heart can survive this, I promise! :DD

Hope this hard chapter was at least entertaining, haha. Things will lighten up...eventually. Yuri should just rip off the bandaid and accept these feelings, right?

Thanks for readinggggg <33