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kovodielnik April 5 2011, 14:21:36 UTC
s-p-o-t

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_superherogirl_ April 6 2011, 23:40:16 UTC
I can't wait to read your awesome feedback sweetie! *HUGS*

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SPOT! choi_minju April 6 2011, 05:38:22 UTC
WILL COMMENT WHEN I HAVE THE TIME!

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Re: SPOT! _superherogirl_ April 6 2011, 23:40:47 UTC
Looking forward to it sweetie! Eeee, thanks for taking the time to read this fic. <3

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Re: SPOT! choi_minju April 10 2011, 01:37:11 UTC
Woah~ trippy!
Kibum's....broken, just like Jessica.
The Circus of Illusions in some way can make the thought that Jessica is actually communicating to Jinki's brain a sane idea.
I feel so bad for them.....I wonder what Jonghyun will have to do while figuring a way for the guys in the circus to escape.

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Re: SPOT! _superherogirl_ April 12 2011, 05:34:25 UTC
Right? The Circus of Illusions has everyone in a whirl. ;) There's still so much about the characters I would like to portray. <3 Poor Jinki though, he thinks he's going bonkers. xD

As for Jjong, he totally has his hands full. xD If he thinks everything is going to be easy peesy, he's got another thing coming. ;)

Thank you for reading and commenting sweetheart!♥

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rayflo April 9 2011, 06:17:59 UTC
LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE it!!!!

I love this series of you so bad! I almost checked everyday, if you updated!
Wow, Onew and Jessica is awesome. ^^
And I really like the relationship between Onew and Kibum. :3

Thanks for the update! ♥

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_superherogirl_ April 12 2011, 05:37:42 UTC
*BLUSHES BRIGHTLY*

*hugs* I'm so honored you like it so much! *pumped up* :DDDD
I'm glad you also like the OnSica in the story. :3 Guilty pleasure at it's best, and that goes for OnKey as well. lmao <3

Onew is definitely not going to make it any easier on Jjong to win over the gypsy. ;)

Eeeeee, Thank you so much for reading and commenting! ♥♥♥ You're awesome! :DDDD

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joothemoo May 8 2011, 20:31:17 UTC
Wow Lucy, this is so wonderful. Everything about it, beginning from the depths of Onew's emotions to the very surface which is the language you used. Absolutely wonderful, I'm speechless. I envy you your fantastic ability to work with words. Everything flows so beautifully, every sentence is a pleasure to read, some phrases make me want to reread them they are so perfect. You are absolutely anti-cliche in every single sentence you write. Omg I used to many superlatives in just one paragraph but I can't help myself. I'm in awe and I wish I was able to write at least 10 percent of your abilities, coz you are absolutely amazing to me ( ... )

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joothemoo May 8 2011, 20:37:11 UTC
I take back the Star Wars comment coz you are on a different level. BETTER for me. I forgot to mention that that quote about ideal illusion, I could relate to it so much.

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joothemoo May 8 2011, 20:59:19 UTC
I also forgot to mention that your banners blow my mind.
I was staring at the one you did for Chase Me just now.

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eesor May 9 2011, 04:44:00 UTC
Okay, okay, I've read everything now. Like all the four chapters has been downloaded on my phone so I could read it more carefully. (I tend to skip details when reading in front of the computer.) It's fantastic! I love every chapter and although, I don't like JongKey, I love the way you portray them because it matches their real life self. I love the flow of the story-- every word was just put on the right place and it's just wonderful. I absolutely don't know how to explain how fascinated I am with this series. The fact that it has Onsica is ++++++++++ more. Hope you update soon. ;)

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