The Dolphin's Cry; Bonus: Simple - 20_heartbeats

[cheeesecat]

Title: The Dolphin's Cry
Pairing: None, but it's Demyx and Ariel friendly.
Rating: PG
Summary: Demyx is not one to feel sorry for himself, but there are times when the strongest of will need some time to rethink things. He doubts that he'll ever be whole again, but Ariel says otherwise.
Authors Note: Bonus prompt: Simple, for the 20_heartbeats challenge

Comments

[bouncy_erbear]

lmao. that was great! XD

[_superherogirl_]

*smiles real wide* Thank you so much sweetie, glad you liked it! :3

[teal_deer]

Heh, cute. Cheezze but cute.

[_superherogirl_]

I'm the queen of cheeeeseee I can't help it! XD But thank you so much! ;**

[demytasse]

That was completely adorable~ I thought I would tell you that. ♥
The part where Demyx gave Ariel a spoon sent me on a giggle fit.

And the part with Luxord was priceless.

Cute fic. n_n

[_superherogirl_]

*wants to huggle your icon XD*

Thank you so much sweets! I'm so glad you did tell me because it made my day so much better. :3 *SNORT* Now I know that was mighty corny, but I can totally see Demyx do something like that. XD

Eee thank you! I had so much fun typing out the part with the organization, and I absolutely adore Luxord. :P Then again I had a blast typing the whole thing out, so knowing that you enjoyed it makes me real happy. :D *huggles*

Thank you once again!♥♥♥ let the power of Demmy be with you! o.O [/cheesyness]

[demytasse]

Eep! I made your day better? Awww that makes me smile. n_n ♥
...yeah as you can see I'm a bit of a cheese-dork myself. xDD So we're all on the same boat, eh?

Luxord is just love. Heheh, my friends question why I like him. o_o;;;

*was about to say something in response...but it sounded vaguely dirty* :DD;;

[_superherogirl_]

You totally did!♥ AWWW! I'm glad I can make you smile!♥ XD

Oooh dorks are an awesome species actually! XD >.>; It's so much more fun to babble and not feel like you made an ass of yourself ( even when you know you did, because seriously I do that all the time. XD )

:O! They shouldn't question such things because George Michael Luxord is teh lovin' major. ;)

*SNORT* OOH DIRTY! Now for some reason I feel like watching the Rocky Horror Picture Show- T-t-t-tt-ouch meeeee I wannna feeel DIRRRTYYY!! Okay wow too random. o.o

[angelflare]

LOL, that was so funny!! XDD I love crack!Org. XIII fics, they're TOO good! *pictures Xemnas' magnificent fall* LOL, that made me giggle so much I almost cried XDDD.

AWWWW, Demyx is too cute and huggable for his own good!! I love what you did with him, he's so naive and friendly (almost in a Sora-ish way! :D) *glomps* Axel is adorable, too. Gotta love him XD.

But you ROCK for including the Little Mermaid!!! It's my totally favorite Disney movie!! *dances* I loved how you wrote Sebastian's lines, you reproduced his speech perfectly!! Haha latin crab, lol. Ariel was really IC as well~~!

<3<3 Great job!! I loved it! :D

[_superherogirl_]

LOL *SNORTS AND TACKLES YOU* Crack does a body good! XDD Oh sweet irony. :x But anywhoey thank you so much dollface! *huggles

[insaneladybug]

Aww, cheesy is fun! XD Demyx and Ariel having a friendship is so cute! I like when she got mad and splashed him, and then of course Sebastian's role. And Demyx giving her a spoon was great! ^^

LOL @ Demyx's line about Marvel Comics. That whole last scene was so much crack. I think my fave line from the Org XIII parts was when Axel decided to find Roxas, who would probably not throw the hissy-fit of the century. XD And then Xemnas falling ... oh man, he's gonna be mad!

[_superherogirl_]

EEEE Thank you so much!! Writing Demyx and Ariel is my guilty pleasure, and them being really good friends just makes me squeal inside. LOL Oh definitely she totally had to splash him, he was being a dodo head. :P *SNORT* Sebastian, I cannot type it enough, was a little too much fun to write. That crab is love.♥ The spoon part was so totally random, but I can definitely see Demyx do something like that. :3

LOL I had to add it, it was begging to be added! I felt so bad about all the crack at the end, but it escaped from me. Once the crack's out there's no way to stop the crack. >.>; o.o;

Oh God yes. x3 Poor Xemnas, he's so fun to pick on, but it's all out of love I swear.♥♥♥ Thank you so much for the lovely review! It made me smile wide, and your icon is making my laugh hysterically right about now. XDDD