Comments | cheeked: all this time spent in vain-- wasted years, wasted gains

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all this time spent in vain-- wasted years, wasted gains

Feb 10, 2011 22:00

( hugely epic Johanna backstory, painfully written in FIRST PERSON )

Comments 4

dalton February 11 2011, 07:23:49 UTC

JESUS CHRIST JACKIE, TEARS ROLLING DOWN MY FACE THE ENTIRE TIME

fkldsjklj ugh the entire motif of having no home and being free, it's so perfect. all of this is so perfect in a horrifying way. Johanna :(((((( fkljsd ugh STAND TALL, JOHANNA. goddamn I cannot form coherency. I love this, everything about this. also beyond impressed that it's all in first person because that is super hard to do but I feel like it's necessary for her backstory because there's so many little quips that make everything perfect and I AM RAMBLING

ugh sending warning gifts to the other kids. I can't deal, this is too heartbreaking and fantastic and all I want is mooooore

derogatory February 11 2011, 08:29:37 UTC

fjhds well i was telling Jamie the other day. Johanna figures all that work she did was to be finally free, so no amount of having ppl show up on New Moore would make her happy?? She'd always want to risk all their lives to get to freedom

BUT AHH THIS IS NOT AS GOOD AS YOURS NOT BY A LONG SHOT fkjds im glad you like it now write more of yours

what warming gift would you send. bread with "JM 8-X!!!" written in it? oh i bet peeta can make those

terrorcandy February 14 2011, 15:55:00 UTC

I just keep coming back and rereading this over and over again. So perfect :(

derogatory February 14 2011, 22:53:52 UTC

uggghhh first person writing style is too hard. I have sudden swells of sympathy for stephanie meyer??

YOU CAN LIKE THIS JUST DONT LET KATNISS HUG JOHANNA. YOU SAW WHAT HAPPENED- SHE STABBED HER FRIEND IN THE THROAT!!!