Writing

[cheekychipmunk]

...I want to do more of it

Comments

[greg_r]

Really enjoyably stories :) And there's at least one voice in the void shouting back.

[huinesoron]

Heeeeey it's you! ^_^ Don't worry, there's still a few of us knocking around here.

I like the fact that your three drabbles take much the same tone, but apply it to three very different themes. It's like they're all focussed differently in time: the first on the immediate past, the second on the present, and the third on both the distant past and the future.

Of the three, I think I like the synesthesia one most: it feels like you're being playful with the senses, painting a picture of the sounds with your words. Spot-on for the subject of the drabble.

[helbling]

I read occasionally! No shouting into the void just yet :)

[lucy_k_p]

I really like all of these - I think the first one is my favourite. The emotion is really intense and realistic - I sympathise with the character. And the second one is wonderfully vivid.

I have been thinking for about 2 years that I'd like to set up a writing group when I have the spare time and things settle down, and I've just never carved out a time for it.

[magicaddict]

There aren't so many left, but keep writing - those who are reading are enjoying it.

And yes, I very much dislike the bus.