NCIS:Rag Doll. Angst/Drama PG 13 - 13/?

Oct 21, 2010 20:22

Title: Rag Doll
Chapter: 13/?
Fandom: NCIS
Author: cheekymice
Rating: PG13
Beta: Scousmuz1K
Genre: Drama/Angst
Disclaimer: I don't own anything relating to the TV show NCIS sadly.

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Rag Doll

Gibbs’ knuckles were giving him a pleasant burn. ( Read more... )

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cheekymice October 22 2010, 21:00:25 UTC
Thanks Audrey.

And...maybe..... :)

xx

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mamamia1964 October 21 2010, 19:57:59 UTC
Hey Cheeky! I'm totally with Audrey. What mean and angst-ridden obstacles will be hitting our Tony next? But I'm glad that you showed this part of his recovery. Tony's always had the "guy's" sense of humor, much of it sex related. Following an op like this one, Tony would have to be deeply affected. Plus, I appreciate that you had him understanding that the people who sent these were trying to joke with him, not make things worse. Sometimes writers make scenes like this play off as mean or cruel. (You know what I mean....)

Thanks again for writing such a good story. I liked that you skipped the recovery, that tends to drag on too much in many stories with too many details and tension filled moments. In this story, I think Tony's mental/psychological & emotional recovery is going to be more interesting than his physical one.

hugs & kisses to you!

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cheekymice October 22 2010, 21:01:27 UTC
Thanks, doll.

And yeah, this wasn't ever going to be a 'hospital' fic. :)

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fredsmith518 October 21 2010, 21:13:32 UTC
see I should be working, but this was here (long day, disco at place of work, was fun though)

Gibbs ran his tongue over his lips feeling more than a little stupid. This case meant a lot to Leon and he should have known he wouldn’t float them down the river on this one. I really liked this, super vibe between them, just knew Jimmy was gonna lose it,

laughed at Jimmy moved away from the two agents and stood next to his superior causing Ducky to chuckle.

“Wise move Mr. Palmer.” The ME whispered and patted his back.

and trust you to throw in more tension with the frostbite

cute Gibbs with Ziva and Abbi re Tony teasing

angsty ending

diolch for the update and for not killing Tony!

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cheekymice October 22 2010, 21:02:44 UTC
Hi Fred

Disco at work. Bet that was fun bet the kids liked it. :)

And no killing...promise!

*bigs hugs*

xxx

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starbuckssue October 21 2010, 22:41:38 UTC
Excellent chapter, Tony really got wound up with everyone at the end there, this is where Gibbs needs to turn up so Tony can just vent, Gibbs understands enough to know that Tony needs to let his reaction run its course and then just be there to talk him through it.

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cheekymice October 22 2010, 21:03:17 UTC
*waves*

Thanks Sue.

xx

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singer_s_lament October 21 2010, 23:59:27 UTC
This is just so sad. Even though Tony got out of the hospital and got his life back he hasn't gotten out of the op. Hopefully he can come back from this and not let his job ruin his career, if that makes any sense.

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cheekymice October 22 2010, 21:03:54 UTC
Thanks honey and it did make sense. :)

xx

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